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Have not done a poem in a while so yeah.Rate this Poem
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Created on 1-5-07
Trapped in a cage
she no longer wants
to be so alone
with her troubling thoughts
She sees all the others
they laugh and they hug
but she sits by herself
with no one to love
And nobody wants her
and nobody sees
just how lonely this girl is
and how loved she wants to be
Unwanted and broken
beaten and bruised
this poor lonely soul
has been so abused
She wants to escape
but it's harder then it seems
she wants someone out there
to hear all her screams
But nobody cares
about that poor girl
alone in this place
alone in the world.
she no longer wants
to be so alone
with her troubling thoughts
She sees all the others
they laugh and they hug
but she sits by herself
with no one to love
And nobody wants her
and nobody sees
just how lonely this girl is
and how loved she wants to be
Unwanted and broken
beaten and bruised
this poor lonely soul
has been so abused
She wants to escape
but it's harder then it seems
she wants someone out there
to hear all her screams
But nobody cares
about that poor girl
alone in this place
alone in the world.
Please Login to post comments| On August 10th 2008 AuraWolf Said : | |
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This is amazing...I can relate to it. |
| On March 9th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said : | |
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wow. this is like crazy good. ur a really good poem writer! kmp! |
| On September 8th 2007 bleedingwolf Said : | |
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this poem is amazing also. u have a really wonderful way of relating to people. that always makes poetry so much better to read. good job!^^ |
| On June 22nd 2007 LOSTWITLOVE Said : | |
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THIS POEM IS REALLY NICE.IT FEELS SO REAL AND I CAN RELATE. |
| On June 17th 2007 Cloeygirl86 Said : | |
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this a a really good poem..it's better then mine.. |
| On May 20th 2007 hashashasyeahs Said : | |
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that poem is really good. it relates to me, and probably other people too. keep writing :] |
| On May 12th 2007 sarahbusto Said : | |
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This is really good, your poems relate me... I like that... |
| On May 6th 2007 Pebblez666 Said : | |
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I really like this one its very good |
| On April 4th 2007 sanityforsaken Said : | |
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I like this one.. it's really good. If someone tells you otherwise, just don't listen. It IS good. |
| On January 23rd 2007 trapped757 Said : | |
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moving but.......I like ur others better |
| On January 5th 2007 hayahayate Said : | |
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Hi... |
| On January 5th 2007 hayahayate Said : | |
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Hi... |
