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Abortion??
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Created on 11-19-06
Abortion??? Month 1
Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby.
Month 2
Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though. It is so nice and warm in here.
Month 3
You know what Mommy, I'm a girl!! I hope that makes you happy. I always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.
Month 4
Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it too.
Month 5
You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?
Month 6
I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!!
Month 7
Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me, Mommy?
Every Abortion Is Just . . .
One more heart that was stopped. Two more eyes that will never see. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never run. One more mouth that will never speak.
Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby.
Month 2
Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though. It is so nice and warm in here.
Month 3
You know what Mommy, I'm a girl!! I hope that makes you happy. I always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.
Month 4
Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it too.
Month 5
You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?
Month 6
I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!!
Month 7
Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me, Mommy?
Every Abortion Is Just . . .
One more heart that was stopped. Two more eyes that will never see. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never run. One more mouth that will never speak.
Please Login to post comments| On August 9th 2008 sweetmedebe Said : | |
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wow. that brought tears to my eyes. |
| On August 7th 2008 Kagemitsu888 Said : | |
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Very powerful I couldint agree more, Im actualy in a band with some of my freinds and I wrote a song called Kill The Seed about this very subject, check it out if you get the time I have it posted up on here. |
| On June 21st 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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u are amazing and so was that poam,and i agree abortion is wrong |
| On April 1st 2008 xxdarkprincess Said : | |
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i love it and i hate Abortion you did a good job keep it up |
| On March 1st 2008 LostSoul1121 Said : | |
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abortion is just like murder.. i believe it is wrong... great poem |
| On February 28th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Wow, its a shame that abortion happens everyday, and all the beautiful children that were to be were no more Great job i love it |
| On February 21st 2008 OmEtOh Said : | |
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i dont agree with abortion so i love your poem. think about all the pain they go through when we deside to take theyr breth away. i dont under stand how anyone could kill a inecint child there not monsters there helpless babys but i love the poem |
| On January 25th 2008 PRiiSCiiLLA Said : | |
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This is really sad. But I don't think I have an opinion on aborition. because for one thing it is murder but then in some cases like a girl in my town that goes to elememtarty school so thats only preK throughy 3rd grade so she can't be that old well her dad raped her and she got pregnate so if she had the baby her being so small it coujld kill her in during labor and think the bably will be all deformed and stuff. so I don't know, I don't have an opinion on abortion. I just believe in God and God never lets you down. |
| On January 3rd 2008 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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I agree with most of the ppl on here. abortion is wrong. i is like murder. and i think it should be illegal. And to KILLTHEBLONDES your a dumb ass. and u need to get ur facts strait. and my cousin had a abortion 10 years ago when she got preant at 15 and she said she regrets it every day of her life and she always will she knows it was a mistake and wishs she could take it back.
i was also raped and luckly i did not get pregant but if i did there is no way in hell i would MURDER the baby or give it up.
so all the ppl who think abortion is right go to hell and stay there. |
| On June 24th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said : | |
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1.she didnt make it,(dont say crap like 'that deosnt matter' and a bunch of other crap,i am just pointing it out)2.technicly(to me) abortion is murder.3.this is very sad.esspecially the part about it hurting.what do they do to the baby when its getting aborted?(i dont know if that is actually the word.i just said that cuz i didnt know what other word to say.lol. |
| On May 12th 2007 sarahbusto Said : | |
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wow, this doesn't suck... really, it's really good. |
| On April 30th 2007 Skyeee09 Said : | |
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Actually, killtheblondz, there is a type of abortoion that u can get the day the baby is born. They flip the baby around and pull it out feet first and suck out the fuckin brain cells and then use them for science and shit. how bout u think about that and tell me that's not baby murder. God damn. U need to look into shit before u start posting shit and try and make the poet look bad. When u get an abortion u have an emptyness inside u and a depression that could last a fuckin lifetime. how bout u think about that? The baby is living!! I consider it murder and it's bull shit I think it should be illegal and ppl like u should just keep ur fuckin mouths SHUT!!!! |
| On April 11th 2007 Penguincrew Said : | |
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I've seen this on myspace, and everytime i read i almost cry. I looove it. It's amazing! |
| On April 9th 2007 actingqueen18 Said : | |
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Also, Jesus doesnt hate anyone for whatever they did or whatever the sin.. He paid the full price when He died on the cross. And to get this clear, i hate abortion, not the people who get an abortion... yes it is still wrong, but i would never hate anyone for that. just wanted to say that so no one got the wrong idea when i said that. |
| On April 9th 2007 actingqueen18 Said : | |
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i hate abortion because for every reason it is wrong..it is like murder... but anyone who went through with one, CAN HEAL! once you put Jesus in your heart, it will still be hard, but you can forgive yourself and heal yourself. it will be hard, but Jesus is always the answer! for anyone who needs healing or just someone to talk to, JESUS IS THERE! i just wanted to let everyone know that. Also, if you feel like you have no help when your pregnant, you dont have to have an abortion. even if you were raped. Because you can find someone to help you, especially Jesus, who will always be there to protect you and help you. He is carrying you in His hands. He is your Refuge and Strength. Just wanted to let everyone know that. |
| On March 10th 2007 snoox Said : | |
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i dont believe in abortions so i relly like this poem |
| On March 6th 2007 eriqita Said : | |
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I would love you name so i can put this on my page and put you name as author. You will be my featured pome this month |
| On March 6th 2007 eriqita Said : | |
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this is for killtheblondz you made a false statement in most states it is legal to have abortion up to seven months . At 3 half months a a baby is forming body parts. they feel if you do you research you would know that when a adortion occures the baby inside acually feels hut n trys to fight the facts
Methods of Abortion
There are many different ways an abortion can be performed. Different methods are used under different circumstances and after different developments of the embryo or fetus. No method of abortion is 100% safe, and no method is 100% successful. (See Side Effects)
Methotrexate Injection Performed in the early first trimester. Methotrexate is injected and begins to attack the cells surrounding the embryo.1 The embryo is deprived of food and oxygen, and eventually dies. Several days later, misoprostol is injected to trigger the expulsion of the embryo. This expulsion may not occur for as long as eight weeks2, and the woman may bleed heavily3. The actual expulsion may occur at any moment and in any place 4. In about 4% of cases, expulsion does not occur and surgery is required 2.
This is not a common form of abortion because Methotrexate is toxic and has many common side-effects, such as nausea, pain, diarrhea, and increased chance of cancer, anemia, and lung disease5.
Suction Aspiration
(vacuum curettage) The most common (98%) form of first trimester abortion6. The cervix is dilated, and a powerful vacuum tube with a sharp cutting edge is inserted. The suction rips apart the body of the baby, and sucks out blood, amniotic fluid, tissue, and body parts7.
The most frequent post-abortion complication occurs with this method. If any fetal or placental tissue is left behind in the uterus, infection can develop.
Dilatation and Curettage (D&C) Generally performed in the first or early second trimester. The cervix is dilated or stretched to permit the insertion of a loop shaped steel knife. The body of the fetus is cut up and removed from the placenta7.
Blood loss and likelihood of uterine perforation are relatively high in this form of abortion8.
Dilation and Evacuation (D&E) Generally performed in the second trimester, this is similar to D&C. Forceps are used to rip away pieces of the developing body and remove them from the womb. Because the skull has often hardened by this time, it may have to be crushed for removal.
Bone fragments from the crushed skull can easily puncture the cervix, causing high blood loss9.
Prostaglandins Injection Performed during the second trimester. Prostaglandins, naturally occurring birthing hormones, are injected to prematurely induce labor. Oftentimes the baby is delivered alive10.
Permanent placental, cervical, and cardiovascular side-effects are common. Even death is possible11.
Saline Amniocentesis (Salt Poisoning) This method, first used in Nazi concentration camps and now common in America, is performed during the second or early third trimester. A needle is injected into the abdomen, and 50-250ml of amniotic liquid is removed12. This is replaced by a concentrated salt that burns away and deteriorates the baby's skin13. Within three days the mother goes into labor and delivers a dead, burned baby14.
This concentrated salt may cause severe hemmorage, cervical injuries, or side effects to the nervous system such as seizures or coma15.
Urea Injection Performed during the second or early third trimester. This is performed just like Salt Poisoning, however it is not as strong.
Though not as dangerous as Salt Poisoning, Urea Injection increases the chance of a failed abortion, which usually results in surgery. Almost 2% of Urea Injection patients must be hospitalized for side-effects16.
Hysterotomy Performed during the third trimester, this is usually performed if other forms of abortion are unsuccessful. Incisions are made in the abdomen, and the baby, placenta, and amniotic sac are removed. Babies are often removed alive during the operation7.
The risk to the mother's health is greatest in this form of abortion, and the chance of complications during later pregnancies is greatly increased8.
Partial Birth Abortion Performed during the late second or third trimester. Using ultrasound, the abortionist grasps the baby's leg with forceps, and partially forcefully delivers all but the head. Scissors are then jammed into the back of the babies skull, and the wound is pryed open. A powerful vacuum tube is inserted and sucks out the baby's brain.
More on Partial Birth Abortion
"Dilatation and evacuation, for example, where fetal tissue is progressively punctured, ripped, and crushed, and which is done after 13 weeks when the fetus certainly responds to noxious stimuli, would cause organic pain in the fetus. Saline amnioinfusion, where a highly concentrated salt solution burns away the outer skin of the fetus, also qualifies as a noxious stimulus [pain]."
-T. Sullivan, M.D., FAAP,
Amer. Academy of Neurosurgeons
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| On February 23rd 2007 hayahayate Said : | |
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Get this through your fucking head killtheblondes, I wrote this because my friend WAS raped and she did get an abortion, she regrets every day of it, It a HUMAN no other way about it, the HUMAN has no input on what is done with it, it is my oppinion and I say fuck it all... Its wrong to get raped well YEAH, but to take out the life of a child who never got to see what this world even looks like, its name, its parents names, colors, smells, tastes, sounds, never be able to grow up and play, have friends, go to a school dance, get a boy/girlfriend... I just see it as wrong... |
| On February 6th 2007 LOSTWITLOVE Said : | |
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WELL I HAD TO GO THROUGH THAT WHEN I WAS 16YRS OLD.I TELL U WHAT IT'S NOT THE EASIEST THING IN THE WORLD TO DO.I WAS 3MNTS,I DIDNT EVEN KNOW HOW OR WHAT THE FETUS WAS STARTING TO DEVELOP BUT I CAN RELATE AND IT'S SOMETHING I WOULD NEVER DO AGAIN IN MY LIFE.I STILL HAVENT FORGOTTEN THE DAY AND HOW IT FELT.I MORN EVERY YEAR THE DAY COMES BY AND I'LL REGRET IT TILL THE DAY I DIE.I'LL NEVA KNOW HOW MY LIFE WOULD'VE TURN OUT.MAYBE IT WOULD'VE BEEN GOOD OR HELL BUT ONE THING IS FOR SURE,I'LL NEVA HEAL. |
| On December 24th 2006 killtheblondz Said : | |
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abortion is onli leagal no further than 3 and 1/2 months and by then it is not a baby it is a fetus still a little ball of cells it has not developed arms / legs / eyes / hands it can not feel or think the reason why abortion is not leagal after 3 and 1/2 months is cuz a few weeks after that the fetus starts 2 turn into a baby and starts to feel / kick and move and may have some thought .... u r obiousli against abortion and make it look like baby murder when it is simpli removing a fetus , hipatheticalli if u or another girl was raped and got pregnant u would get rid of the fetus right ? or would u realli want when u see ur baby 4 the first time 2 be reminded of the rapist and the most painful / tragic thing in ur life and not be able to love or look at ur child and possibli even hate them ? think about that |
| On December 23rd 2006 trapped757 Said : | |
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wow.... |
| On December 10th 2006 hayahayate Said : | |
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Hiya everyone I appearentaly have some haters on my lookup that dont belive that this is my work because I have other accounts on other websites that have my art and poems on it and I let people on MYspace and crap use my poems... I'm kinda upset about this ( that and my account here was hacked by me older brother in Canada and he's been yelling at other people on my account trying to make me look stronger than I am ) so I might not have any more poems coming up... |
| On December 2nd 2006 iamthefury Said : | |
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Don't put "this sucks" under everything on here. Its getting annoying. |
| On November 25th 2006 joshvsedge Said : | |
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That's Sad =,,,,( |
