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A Broken Wing... |
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Broken WIng... |
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My Suicide |
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New Years |
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Mommy... |
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Abortion?? |
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Forgotten.... |
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Mommy...
Mommy...
Johnny brought a gun to school,
He told his friends that it was cool,
And when he pulled the trigger back,
It shot with a great bid crack.
Mommy,
I was a good girl,
I did what I was told,
I went to school,
I got straight A's,
I even got the gold!
But Mommy,
when I went school that day,
I never said good-bye,
I'm sorry Mommy,
I had to go,
But Mommy,
please don't cry.
When Johnny shot the gun,
He hit me and another,
And all because Johnny,
Got the gun from his older brother.
Mommy,
please tell Daddy; That I love him very much,
And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.
And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now,
And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now,
And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best;
Mommy,
I'm not the first,
I'm no better than the rest.
Mommy,
tell my teachers; I won't show up for class,
And never to forget this,
And please don't let this pass.
Mommy,
why'd it have to be me?
No one deserves this,
Mommy,
warn the others,
Mommy I left without a kiss.
And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,
I think I even saw a doctor,
Trying not to cry.
Mommy,
I'm slowly dying,
With a bullet in my chest,
But Mommy please remember,
I'm in heaven with the rest.
Mommy I ran as fast as I could,
When I heard that crack,
Mommy,
listen to me if you would,
I wanted to go to college; I wanted to try things that were new,
I guess I'm not going with Daddy,
On that trip to the new zoo.
I wanted to get married,
I wanted to have a kid,
I wanted to be an actress,
Mommy,
I wanted to live.
But Mommy I must go now,
The time is getting late,
Mommy, tell Chris,
I'm sorry but I had to cancel the date.
I love you Mommy,
I always have,
I know; you know it's true,
And all I wanted to say is,
"Mommy, I love you."
| On August 27th 2008 Melly82092 Said : | |
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Oh my gosh this poem made me cry....! :( |
| On August 10th 2008 AuraWolf Said : | |
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This is so good...it made me cry! I loved every part of it. Very nice. |
| On August 9th 2008 sweetmedebe Said : | |
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tears...tears...tears |
| On June 21st 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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awesome and sad.u should write music to your poams |
| On June 13th 2008 Babytia91 Said : | |
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that was really good...it gave me total goosebumps |
| On June 9th 2008 6615sweet Said : | |
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this is a very great poem..n i can tell u no how 2 get to people...u no how to contoll there feelings..thanks |
| On June 9th 2008 burlesque13 Said : | |
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my eyes are watering.....its a shame that my mom and i dont have a good relationship or i could rite poems like this |
| On March 27th 2008 Stolensoul16 Said : | |
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Thats the first poem that ever made me cry. |
| On March 27th 2008 lostvampire09 Said : | |
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ive heard this poem before but i want ya t know that this is one of my favs and it brings tears to my eyes every time i read it |
| On March 19th 2008 mommyhamilton Said : | |
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i've heard this before u didnt write it just to let you know!!!! |
| On March 1st 2008 LostSoul1121 Said : | |
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this is a very good poem.. it made me cry.. |
| On January 30th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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THIS IS MY FAV. POEM CUZ IT HAS SO MUCH EMOTION IN IT I JUST LUV IT SO MUCH |
| On January 29th 2008 sweetie1294 Said : | |
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wow good work it made me cry and i dont cry easy |
| On January 29th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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very sad poem... |
| On December 4th 2007 blademaxwell Said : | |
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that's a sad poem |
| On October 18th 2007 AMseenPM Said : | |
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She stole this poem too heres the real author copywrite and all!!http://kinypinky.tripod.com/id14.html |
| On August 31st 2007 AmiottDe Said : | |
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That poem was so sad. I actually have tears running down my cheeks. It is sooooo good. |
| On August 13th 2007 demonica666 Said : | |
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it made me cry :'( i hope this never happens to my son |
| On July 22nd 2007 USNAVYCHICK Said : | |
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wow that made me cry |
| On June 25th 2007 xxARIxx Said : | |
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oh my gosh! this actually almost brought tears to my eyes! (and thats not very easy to do) good job! |
| On June 21st 2007 duece4932 Said : | |
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i was actually near tears.. kudos to you. you are way better than that suicidal, gothic bitch with like 63476374 |
| On June 16th 2007 TweetyBird1992 Said : | |
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OKAY YOU HAVE THE POWER TO BRING OUT THE MOST EMOTIONAL SIDE IN PEOPLE I'M ACTUALLY CRYING...great poem. |
| On June 11th 2007 hellshelper Said : | |
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amazing!so,sad i also write sad poetry but im not that good! |
| On May 19th 2007 rosamae010 Said : | |
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this poem brings back so many memories to me! some that i wish i could forget but i'm glad that i knew that person before they died! it's very moving even if you can't relate to it!
keep up the good work |
| On May 13th 2007 UGLYBELL Said : | |
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OH WOW....I THINK DIS POEM IS BEAUITFUL! Tear... |


