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My Suicide
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Created on 11-18-06
Sick to my stomach.
As my eyes fill with tears.
My mind goes blank.
As I realize my fears.
Too many scars on my skin.
My heart breaks into thousands of shards.
This is a war I cannot win.
As the devil lays out his cards.
So call me a psycho, call me an outcast.
Tell me I'm nothing.
Cause I know my life will not last.
So preach to me.
Try to make me one of you.
I know what I am.
And to myself I am true.
Try to break me.
And tell me lies.
Try to change me.
And make me see everything through your eyes.
I know what is right.
I know what is wrong.
I have done nothing to you.
So why do you say I don't belong?
I try to stand so I can talk to you.
But my knees are weak and your words are not true.
Don't change me from what I am.
I have done nothing worng, so this is my last stand.
The razor gleams so brilliantly bright.
I know my last heart break was tonight.
So I take my life out of gods hands.
Into my own, while you refuse to understand.
I did this for me, and for you.
Call me selfish, and anything but one of you.
You always said there was no escape.
But what of suicide?
Yes. That surely was my fate.
As my eyes fill with tears.
My mind goes blank.
As I realize my fears.
Too many scars on my skin.
My heart breaks into thousands of shards.
This is a war I cannot win.
As the devil lays out his cards.
So call me a psycho, call me an outcast.
Tell me I'm nothing.
Cause I know my life will not last.
So preach to me.
Try to make me one of you.
I know what I am.
And to myself I am true.
Try to break me.
And tell me lies.
Try to change me.
And make me see everything through your eyes.
I know what is right.
I know what is wrong.
I have done nothing to you.
So why do you say I don't belong?
I try to stand so I can talk to you.
But my knees are weak and your words are not true.
Don't change me from what I am.
I have done nothing worng, so this is my last stand.
The razor gleams so brilliantly bright.
I know my last heart break was tonight.
So I take my life out of gods hands.
Into my own, while you refuse to understand.
I did this for me, and for you.
Call me selfish, and anything but one of you.
You always said there was no escape.
But what of suicide?
Yes. That surely was my fate.
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2008 ajvanmeel Said : | |
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i think that a lot of people can relate to this. i no i can |
| On August 11th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said : | |
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This is far to sad. No one should have to go through pain and suffering, like this. But how you wrote it into a poem made it amazing, and i love it. |
| On July 30th 2008 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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I love this..
I can relatee to thiss.
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| On July 7th 2008 Carolgreen Said : | |
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that was nice |
| On July 1st 2008 buddadang Said : | |
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HOLY CRAP THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING omg i love it !!! |
| On June 21st 2008 NotAsPerfect Said : | |
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so deep and got threw to a lot of people.. just reading the comments told me lol but your poem rox and is true.. like you said "But what of suicide?
Yes. That surely was my fate." i love it! |
| On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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AWE SOME! MY POAMS SOUND LIKE THIS YOU SHOULD READ ONE OR TWO OR THREE OR FOUR.... |
| On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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this is my fave poam on here! read mine?? |
| On June 20th 2008 VbBbTrackE03 Said : | |
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This is good, but the rhyme scheme got off a few times, and the rhythm got off a lot. There is a lot of emotion, so that's good. I can feel your pain. You did a great job letting everything out. Great imagery. Good job |
| On June 16th 2008 crzychick2578 Said : | |
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omg this is so good |
| On June 15th 2008 21gemini Said : | |
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................... sorry i was speechless for a moment this is a great poem |
| On June 14th 2008 katie123owns Said : | |
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dats soo good
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| On June 14th 2008 KillMeKissMe24 Said : | |
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This is Beautiful and somethin that I can really relate to. I love it. |
| On June 13th 2008 putsy Said : | |
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your a psycho, your an outcast and your nothing |
| On June 10th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow |
| On June 9th 2008 bigZ139 Said : | |
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whoa...this is awesome...its like...totally me, too...u should really take up professional...im trying to... |
| On June 6th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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this was very good. Nice job :) |
| On June 4th 2008 bluesz Said : | |
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this.. this is something i can really relate too |
| On June 4th 2008 KinHoshiko Said : | |
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i know how you feel. this is simply amazing and i thank you so much cause after reading this i know im not alone. |
| On June 3rd 2008 6615sweet Said : | |
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completely how i feel.,.,.,.,.thanks,., |
| On June 1st 2008 piapie Said : | |
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omg dis is deep
i luv dis poem |
| On May 28th 2008 esmi05 Said : | |
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deep |
| On May 22nd 2008 SomeGirl38 Said : | |
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this is like the best poem i have ever read and its amazing i can relate entirely life is hard and suddenly we dont belong because we arent like everyone else and they blame us for something we've never done but its ok dont give up cause if it doesnt get better then just remember that when time goes by you'll be better than them... and dont forget that
still the best ive ever read |
| On May 14th 2008 freakwhair Said : | |
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holly shit dude.
very good
you should be writing for a band |
| On May 12th 2008 f2daerg2i2e Said : | |
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wow, unbelieveably good. i think im clinaclly depressed (ive felt this way for 3 yrs now) and reading these things always helps. |
