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Broken WIng...

Views (242) Anger Created on 11-17-06 Flag

I loved wind blowing through your hair,
you rescued me from my dispair.
An angel god had sent you here,
to wake me up from my nightmare.
You told me I had nothing to fear,
then suddenly you disappeared.

I thought our love you had betrayed,
but numb and lifeless, there you lay.
Breathing silence on your last day,
your eyes so pale no longer jade.
I held your hand as you began to fade,
hoping inside you would be okay,
then suddenly you slipped away


The morbid ice surrounds my soul,
I needed you, to have and to hold.
My warmest shadows seem so cold,
without you here all life turns dull.
I'm falling through the deepest hole,
as memories of you begin to unfold.

I'll Never sleep through another night,
without you here it isn't right.
All I can do is lay in fright,
fighting tears with all my might.
A darkened life, no sign of light,
a broken wing, no hope of flight

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On March 1st 2008 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 awesome i love it!!
On July 9th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said :
bekahrox2014 like,no offense,but i think its kinda annoying when it always rhymes.....
On March 24th 2007 SilverSilence Said :
SilverSilence :)
On December 10th 2006 hayahayate Said :
hayahayate Hiya everyone I appearentaly have some haters on my lookup that dont belive that this is my work because I have other accounts on other websites that have my art and poems on it and I let people on MYspace and crap use my poems... I'm kinda upset about this ( that and my account here was hacked by me older brother in Canada and he's been yelling at other people on my account trying to make me look stronger than I am ) so I might not have any more poems coming up...
On November 27th 2006 iamthefury Said :
iamthefury Wow, I'm impressed. This is better than my stuff for sure ^^
On November 23rd 2006 hayahayate Said :
hayahayate realy?? I dont think its that good...
On November 23rd 2006 alex192 Said :
alex192 Whoa. Keepi it up, and you might be famous. :)
On November 23rd 2006 hayahayate Said :
hayahayate Thank you again :D
On November 22nd 2006 SexyMCRkitty Said :
SexyMCRkitty Very deep. I like all the similes in them; ur a great poet.very nice.