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Worry about my baby

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The illness

Views (298) Worry Created on 5-18-07 Flag
I see you into deep pain,
Feels like a knife cutting you,
Stabbing your heart n lungs,
Making you stop breathing on me,
Makes you feel like your going to leave me.

Please don't leave me,
Your my everything, my life,
I wish this illness would stop,
But no cure is here,
You stopped breathing on me,
Don't leave me!!

What shall I do when your gone,
When this illness kills you?
What you want me to do baby?
I need you,
I love you,
Your my life,
Don't go!

I would be sad,
If you left me in this world alone,
So don't leave me,
I wish this illness would die out,
I hate this!!
I need you!!
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On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said :
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Very expressive I'm very sorry.
On July 12th 2007 cbewing Said :
cbewing I like this, very emotional.
On June 8th 2007 JenMoe Said :
JenMoe Wow... Very nice.
On May 27th 2007 Bethy420 Said :
Bethy420 wow thats crazy.....good but crazy....i felt it....great job!!!
On May 18th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said :
Savedbyalamb I like it a lot.
On May 18th 2007 Pushpop09 Said :
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I love it.
On May 18th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv This is a very touching poem. Great job!! i like it.
On May 18th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said :
thatonegirl84 It's really scary to watch a loved one go through an illness like that. I don't know how it feels to be my own child, but I did go through it with my little brother. Check out my poem Little Warrior.