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Created:
05/18 2007
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Worry
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Imbored9909 |
The illness
I see you into deep pain,
Feels like a knife cutting you,
Stabbing your heart n lungs,
Making you stop breathing on me,
Makes you feel like your going to leave me.
Please don't leave me,
Your my everything, my life,
I wish this illness would stop,
But no cure is here,
You stopped breathing on me,
Don't leave me!!
What shall I do when your gone,
When this illness kills you?
What you want me to do baby?
I need you,
I love you,
Your my life,
Don't go!
I would be sad,
If you left me in this world alone,
So don't leave me,
I wish this illness would die out,
I hate this!!
I need you!!
Feels like a knife cutting you,
Stabbing your heart n lungs,
Making you stop breathing on me,
Makes you feel like your going to leave me.
Please don't leave me,
Your my everything, my life,
I wish this illness would stop,
But no cure is here,
You stopped breathing on me,
Don't leave me!!
What shall I do when your gone,
When this illness kills you?
What you want me to do baby?
I need you,
I love you,
Your my life,
Don't go!
I would be sad,
If you left me in this world alone,
So don't leave me,
I wish this illness would die out,
I hate this!!
I need you!!
| On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said: |
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| Very expressive I'm very sorry. |
| On July 12th 2007 cbewing Said: |
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| I like this, very emotional. |
| On June 8th 2007 JenMoe Said: |
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| Wow... Very nice. |
| On May 27th 2007 Bethy420 Said: |
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| wow thats crazy.....good but crazy....i felt it....great job!!! |
| On May 18th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said: |
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| I like it a lot. |
| On May 18th 2007 Pushpop09 Said: |
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| I love it. |
| On May 18th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
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| This is a very touching poem. Great job!! i like it. |
| On May 18th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said: |
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| It's really scary to watch a loved one go through an illness like that. I don't know how it feels to be my own child, but I did go through it with my little brother. Check out my poem Little Warrior. |


