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The Note
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Created on 5-13-07
I sit here with a gun beside me,
Writing you this,
And I thought I ment everything to you,
But I was wrong,
And all i have written on me is,
I love you,
But you don't care,
I just a worthless human being,
With no life.
I am Black inside,
I am cold inside,
Do you care?
Fuck no you don't,
You never did,
You never will,
So now i point this gun up to my chin,
With my last tear drops for you,
But you won't be there to caught it,
So leave me.
I know I am stupid,
Stupid to fall in love,
With someone who won't even give me the chance,
To love.
I am one worthless human being,
Now I taken this bullet,
Right though my skull,
I sitting here with 1 last tear drop,
Waiting for you to caught it,
But your not here too do that,
So Goodbye,
I pull this trigger,
BOOM!
I am dead with no more soul,
No more hate!
No more Pain!
You never loved me so why care now?
Writing you this,
And I thought I ment everything to you,
But I was wrong,
And all i have written on me is,
I love you,
But you don't care,
I just a worthless human being,
With no life.
I am Black inside,
I am cold inside,
Do you care?
Fuck no you don't,
You never did,
You never will,
So now i point this gun up to my chin,
With my last tear drops for you,
But you won't be there to caught it,
So leave me.
I know I am stupid,
Stupid to fall in love,
With someone who won't even give me the chance,
To love.
I am one worthless human being,
Now I taken this bullet,
Right though my skull,
I sitting here with 1 last tear drop,
Waiting for you to caught it,
But your not here too do that,
So Goodbye,
I pull this trigger,
BOOM!
I am dead with no more soul,
No more hate!
No more Pain!
You never loved me so why care now?
Please Login to post comments| On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said : | |
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You are not a worthless human and you know it.You have a purpose to live and just because she won't except your love doesn't mean that no one else will.The pain hurts now and it always will but time helps heal you.I would know. |
| On February 16th 2008 lilFrazier01 Said : | |
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this is really good. i love it. sounds like something id do. |
| On October 16th 2007 melbell101 Said : | |
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this is deep its exactly how i feel right now this is very good the best |
| On July 10th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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aw..deep, sad, emotional, and very good |
| On June 8th 2007 JenMoe Said : | |
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Interesting..... slightly disturbing simply because it is so real. But, you put some effort into it. Nicely done. |
| On May 14th 2007 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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D E E P |
| On May 14th 2007 sammyannolivel Said : | |
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joshi i love this.. |
| On May 13th 2007 Etain13McCloud Said : | |
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sad. but then again so is heart break. |
| On May 13th 2007 blutess Said : | |
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i can't understand y people use suicide as means 2 love but maybe thats cause i've never been in love so in the mean time, very nice poem. |
| On May 13th 2007 runawaylove18 Said : | |
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very good poem |
| On May 13th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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I love the ending! You never loved me so why care now? That is the most honest thing I've ever heard!!! I hope this is only make believe Joshi!! Please don't do this. It's scary. GREAT poem though!!! GREAT!! |
| On May 13th 2007 hackerlord Said : | |
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Yes people this is a suicide note |
