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Deep
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Created on 5-12-07
Deep in my heart,
I feel down,
Deep in love,
She won't give me a chance,
Deep down in my soul,
I cry.
I kissed your tender lips,
Deep down,
My soul smiles,
Deep in me,
Will you ever be mine?
Deep down in your eyes,
I see a beauitful, young girl,
Who loves me,
But never will take my hands,
And hold them tenderly.
Deep down,
I wish you could be mine,
But somewhere deep in me,
I'm still happy,
To have you as my bestfriend.
I feel down,
Deep in love,
She won't give me a chance,
Deep down in my soul,
I cry.
I kissed your tender lips,
Deep down,
My soul smiles,
Deep in me,
Will you ever be mine?
Deep down in your eyes,
I see a beauitful, young girl,
Who loves me,
But never will take my hands,
And hold them tenderly.
Deep down,
I wish you could be mine,
But somewhere deep in me,
I'm still happy,
To have you as my bestfriend.
Please Login to post comments| On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said : | |
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Wow that has to suck knowing that she'll never love you the way you love her.I'm sorry. |
| On June 25th 2007 goodgurl8504 Said : | |
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Awesome poem! |
| On June 8th 2007 JenMoe Said : | |
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Now, this one I like completely.... very good.. |
| On May 14th 2007 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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Way to express yourself bro |
| On May 12th 2007 Babylove45 Said : | |
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i agree wit the gilr under me
i like this poem too |
| On May 12th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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AWWWW!!! I love that you can be honest about your feelings like this...It's what makes you a sweethear...(and that it's actually genuine of course). I like this poem a ton!!! :) |
