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Gone
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Created on 5-3-07
Your drifing away from me,
I try to run you down,
I fading away from you further and further,
The wind blows you more away from me,
Now i sit here feeling sick,
Because the girl of my dreams,
And my life,
Is Gone.
Deep I feel someone stolen her,
From my castle,
Called love,
Knowing I won't ever get her back,
She fading from me,
She gone to a better person,
All I can do is,
Remember the memories,
We shared together.
My life is through,
This is something I hate to lose,
We loved one another,
That all i can remember,
Is I love you,
Till my last breath.
I try to run you down,
I fading away from you further and further,
The wind blows you more away from me,
Now i sit here feeling sick,
Because the girl of my dreams,
And my life,
Is Gone.
Deep I feel someone stolen her,
From my castle,
Called love,
Knowing I won't ever get her back,
She fading from me,
She gone to a better person,
All I can do is,
Remember the memories,
We shared together.
My life is through,
This is something I hate to lose,
We loved one another,
That all i can remember,
Is I love you,
Till my last breath.
Please Login to post comments| On April 4th 2008 8r0k3nBaby Said : | |
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very nice
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| On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said : | |
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Trust me I know the feeling but for a guy not a girl.Very good expresive writing. |
| On December 13th 2007 bridgewatera Said : | |
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that is really good and sad i like it a lot....... |
| On June 22nd 2007 lollipopgurl14 Said : | |
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omg i kno how you feel boi! omg :( thats a sad thinh right there ... im sorry.. wow! that was a nice poem.. if i could give you 100000 points for this i would ... :) |
| On June 8th 2007 JenMoe Said : | |
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I love this... Its sad and emotional... nice. |
| On May 4th 2007 alanbrennan3 Said : | |
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i feel your pain it happened to me =( |
| On May 3rd 2007 Pretty28girl Said : | |
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wow thats really sweet and nice and everyhing lol you dont know but what evs ... but love the poem i write poems but i dont want to let everyone to see it becuase its really personal! lol well peace |
| On May 3rd 2007 Our0Last0Stand Said : | |
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hmmmmm |
| On May 3rd 2007 blutess Said : | |
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very good. kinda like sweet & sad at the same time. |
| On May 3rd 2007 marlana79 Said : | |
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Awwe that's so sweet:) |
| On May 3rd 2007 amurrin Said : | |
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i like this...can relate to the feeling of possibly losing someone. |
| On May 3rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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Wow. She was a lucky girl! Very lucky. I love this poem! |
