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kinda sux but ohwellRate this Poem
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Created:
04/28 2007
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446
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Other
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Imbored9909 |
Deep Down
Looking deep into your eyes,
Seeing obscurity,
Knowing the evil you could be,
Would destory me forever.
Deep down your soul,
I seeking hate,
Knowing the truth,
How you feel about me,
That could destory my life.
Deep down your heart,
I seeking blackness,
With pain clawing,
And Scars of broken hearts,
You been though.
Deep down your smile,
I seeking beauty,
But deep down,
You don't care.
Deep down your beauiful self,
All I must say,
No matter what you feel,
I love you till end of times.
Seeing obscurity,
Knowing the evil you could be,
Would destory me forever.
Deep down your soul,
I seeking hate,
Knowing the truth,
How you feel about me,
That could destory my life.
Deep down your heart,
I seeking blackness,
With pain clawing,
And Scars of broken hearts,
You been though.
Deep down your smile,
I seeking beauty,
But deep down,
You don't care.
Deep down your beauiful self,
All I must say,
No matter what you feel,
I love you till end of times.
| On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said: |
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| All you need to do is revise it and it doesn't suck. |
| On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said: |
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| OMG! that is so good! |
| On May 14th 2007 FamousOne777 Said: |
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| this doesnt suck, nice work man |
| On May 2nd 2007 amurrin Said: |
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| awh, i don't think this is the newest but i certainly like it. =) nice job. |
| On April 30th 2007 babyblue187954 Said: |
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| really good.. |
| On April 29th 2007 hairdyejunkie Said: |
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| thats sweet
and deep
haha |
| On April 29th 2007 dureall Said: |
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| Kudo's bro, You got true skillz, keep em coming. |
| On April 29th 2007 holliirenepork Said: |
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| your really good. im in love wit this poem. |
| On April 29th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
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| AWW!!! Is this for the new girl of yours? |
| On April 28th 2007 Electronicmeds Said: |
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| aw, sweet. |
| On April 28th 2007 runawaylove18 Said: |
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| awee i really like this poem ! |


