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kinda sux but ohwell

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Deep Down

Views (268) Other Created on 4-28-07 Flag
Looking deep into your eyes,
Seeing obscurity,
Knowing the evil you could be,
Would destory me forever.
Deep down your soul,
I seeking hate,
Knowing the truth,
How you feel about me,
That could destory my life.
Deep down your heart,
I seeking blackness,
With pain clawing,
And Scars of broken hearts,
You been though.
Deep down your smile,
I seeking beauty,
But deep down,
You don't care.
Deep down your beauiful self,
All I must say,
No matter what you feel,
I love you till end of times.
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On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said :
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All you need to do is revise it and it doesn't suck.
On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said :
sweety959 OMG! that is so good!
On May 14th 2007 FamousOne777 Said :
FamousOne777 this doesnt suck, nice work man
On May 2nd 2007 amurrin Said :
amurrin awh, i don't think this is the newest but i certainly like it. =) nice job.
On April 30th 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 really good..
On April 29th 2007 hairdyejunkie Said :
hairdyejunkie thats sweet and deep haha
On April 29th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall Kudo's bro, You got true skillz, keep em coming.
On April 29th 2007 holliirenepork Said :
holliirenepork your really good. im in love wit this poem.
On April 29th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv AWW!!! Is this for the new girl of yours?
On April 28th 2007 Electronicmeds Said :
Electronicmeds aw, sweet.
On April 28th 2007 runawaylove18 Said :
runawaylove18 awee i really like this poem !