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Created:
04/26 2007
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2408
Category:
Pain
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Imbored9909 |
Painful
I feel this thin needle
With this sharp point stabbing my heart
Ripping it to pieces
Making me feel pain all over.
You stab me where it hurts,
You gave me this pain,
Now i am suffering this heartache,
Now i'm living with this cold soul.
You torn me up,
With your bullshit lies,
Your living with,
In this fucked up world.
I trusted you,
You crushed me,
I loved you,
You hated me,
Now I see,
What you really are.
With this sharp point stabbing my heart
Ripping it to pieces
Making me feel pain all over.
You stab me where it hurts,
You gave me this pain,
Now i am suffering this heartache,
Now i'm living with this cold soul.
You torn me up,
With your bullshit lies,
Your living with,
In this fucked up world.
I trusted you,
You crushed me,
I loved you,
You hated me,
Now I see,
What you really are.
Please Login to post comments| On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said: |
| I love this poem is full of raw emotion.It would make a great heartbreak song all it needs is a chorus.I sang it and it made me cry but it's really good. |
| On November 18th 2007 cmccray Said: |
| Nice! |
| On August 4th 2007 nwirotod Said: |
| good job!! |
| On July 12th 2007 emily28793 Said: |
| omg dat poem is really good....it shows alot of pain |
| On July 5th 2007 bluegirl0889 Said: |
| wow *tears rolling down* this reminds me of how i felt when I lost someone I loved, but I have moved on since and fallen in love again |
| On June 27th 2007 october1015 Said: |
| WOW. thathas a lot of meaning to it. I loved it. =] |
| On June 27th 2007 october1015 Said: |
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| WOW. thathas a lot of meaning to it. I loved it. =] |
| On June 13th 2007 AtkinsJ Said: |
| Im surely rating that, thumbs up for you. |
| On June 13th 2007 AtkinsJ Said: |
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| Hey, thats really good. |
| On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said: |
| good job! |
| On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said: |
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| damn! dats wats up man! i loved it and can totally relate! |
| On June 9th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said: |
| liars suck, dont they? i know how u feel |
| On May 17th 2007 TreeSpirit Said: |
| Good write,know where your coming from.
That's what so great about poetry.The art of expressing what you feel at a moment.Then courage to write all down,before the moment is gone.the your left with a piece of art work.
Stay cool
Tree Spirit |
| On April 30th 2007 sweetcarrie9 Said: |
| WOW i wish i could write like you...i love it...very nicely done!! |
| On April 28th 2007 Averex Said: |
| Nice man, wish I could write like that |
| On April 28th 2007 Electronicmeds Said: |
| excellent |
| On April 27th 2007 Darkrisky Said: |
| i love it. the wording is just perfect! |
| On April 26th 2007 nascott01 Said: |
| this is very good :) |
| On April 26th 2007 OreoCat Said: |
| this is really good, i can feel the pain in your words. |
| On April 26th 2007 hairdyejunkie Said: |
| This is really good. |
| On April 26th 2007 darkenigma Said: |
| thats really good man |
| On April 26th 2007 refused1001 Said: |
| I love how these pseudo-alternative rock songs are labeled "deep".. |
| On April 26th 2007 pink23fairie Said: |
| that's awesome I can really feel your pain |
| On April 26th 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said: |
| It's deep... but beautiful Joshi... I love it and can fully relate to that. *.* |
| On April 26th 2007 thecolorblack Said: |
| nice |
