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idk but i felt this

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Painful

Views (2224) Pain Created on 4-26-07 Flag
I feel this thin needle
With this sharp point stabbing my heart
Ripping it to pieces
Making me feel pain all over.

You stab me where it hurts,
You gave me this pain,
Now i am suffering this heartache,
Now i'm living with this cold soul.

You torn me up,
With your bullshit lies,
Your living with,
In this fucked up world.

I trusted you,
You crushed me,
I loved you,
You hated me,
Now I see,
What you really are.
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On March 23rd 2008 EvilBonez17 Said :
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I love this poem is full of raw emotion.It would make a great heartbreak song all it needs is a chorus.I sang it and it made me cry but it's really good.
On November 18th 2007 cmccray Said :
cmccray Nice!
On August 4th 2007 nwirotod Said :
nwirotod good job!!
On July 12th 2007 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 omg dat poem is really good....it shows alot of pain
On July 5th 2007 bluegirl0889 Said :
bluegirl0889 wow *tears rolling down* this reminds me of how i felt when I lost someone I loved, but I have moved on since and fallen in love again
On June 27th 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 WOW. thathas a lot of meaning to it. I loved it. =]
On June 27th 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 WOW. thathas a lot of meaning to it. I loved it. =]
On June 13th 2007 AtkinsJ Said :
AtkinsJ Im surely rating that, thumbs up for you.
On June 13th 2007 AtkinsJ Said :
AtkinsJ Hey, thats really good.
On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said :
sweety959 good job!
On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said :
sweety959 damn! dats wats up man! i loved it and can totally relate!
On June 9th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said :
LostLoverGrl liars suck, dont they? i know how u feel
On May 17th 2007 TreeSpirit Said :
TreeSpirit Good write,know where your coming from. That's what so great about poetry.The art of expressing what you feel at a moment.Then courage to write all down,before the moment is gone.the your left with a piece of art work. Stay cool Tree Spirit
On April 30th 2007 sweetcarrie9 Said :
sweetcarrie9 WOW i wish i could write like you...i love it...very nicely done!!
On April 28th 2007 Averex Said :
Averex Nice man, wish I could write like that