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Created:
04/23 2007
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Pain
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Imbored9909 |
Am I Dreaming
"Am I Dreaming"
Am i dreaming
Or is this real
I lost you?
I broken your heart,
Now I feel like quiting,
Ending this worthless life
And hiding in the darkness shadows.
Am I dreaming or is it true,
I was just with you,
Holding your heart,
I broken yours,
Now I also broken my own,
This is the end,
Of the world I live in.
Am I dreaming or is it a fact,
I made this burn?
Deep down where it hurts,
My body is melting with the pain,
I suscide my own life.
Am I dreaming or is it a saying,
That you was happy for us?
Answer that please!
Am i dreaming
Or is this real
I lost you?
I broken your heart,
Now I feel like quiting,
Ending this worthless life
And hiding in the darkness shadows.
Am I dreaming or is it true,
I was just with you,
Holding your heart,
I broken yours,
Now I also broken my own,
This is the end,
Of the world I live in.
Am I dreaming or is it a fact,
I made this burn?
Deep down where it hurts,
My body is melting with the pain,
I suscide my own life.
Am I dreaming or is it a saying,
That you was happy for us?
Answer that please!
Please Login to post comments| On June 22nd 2007 lollipopgurl14 Said: |
| omg.. i love this poem.. your really great at writing :) ♥bree |
| On May 18th 2007 Pushpop09 Said: |
| wow...i really like it. has alot of emotions in it. I can really relat to this. Keep writing. |
| On May 15th 2007 lavonea Said: |
| awww! i liked it! sorry to hear that u went though that but what doesnt kill ya makes u stronger! |
| On May 2nd 2007 baby101204 Said: |
| you my friend, are a genius. Kudos. |
| On April 30th 2007 babyblue187954 Said: |
| EXCELLENT great Job |
| On April 28th 2007 Averex Said: |
| Dude I have felt this same way before, except I couldnt put it into word as well as you did. Nice dude. |
| On April 26th 2007 pink23fairie Said: |
| Wow really good I love it =) |
| On April 24th 2007 dureall Said: |
| Damn bro, thats some writing skilz man. |
| On April 24th 2007 nascott01 Said: |
| it's a great poem. i'm sorry you guys broke up. stay strong :) |
| On April 24th 2007 Sydmon Said: |
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| Wow u are realy really good at writing. I am sorry that u and ur girl broke up I know how u feel trust me. |
| On April 23rd 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: |
| hannah* sorry i spelled it wrong |
| On April 23rd 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: |
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| wow its very deep joshi.. but at the same time very beautiful.. u are very good at writing.. im sorry about u and hanna |
| On April 23rd 2007 runawaylove18 Said: |
| awee im sorry |
| On April 23rd 2007 ssjscotty Said: |
| pretty deep indeed |
| On April 23rd 2007 blutess Said: |
| sorry 2 hear bout ur break up. |
| On April 23rd 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said: |
| Damn Joshi!! That so sucks!! *hugz* Aww... *.* |
| On April 23rd 2007 Cherry97 Said: |
| Awwwws :[ |
| On April 23rd 2007 drowningnlove Said: |
| very beautiful poem, and very very sad. Every one is here for you |
| On April 23rd 2007 DrOfAllThings Said: |
| damn, sucks to be you. Me and my girlfriend been together for 4 years but should'nt be. we have two beautiful kids though, thats the only good that came out of our relationship. anyways, deep poem. |
| On April 23rd 2007 Chelle57 Said: |
| Oh I'm so so sorry! I had know idea. I know how that feels. I'm here for ya Josh. I'm pretty sure alot of ppl are. |
| On April 23rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said: |
| Wow. emotional. It's very deep. It's very sweet. This girl was very lucky. I'm almost jealous. I am sorry this happened to you. Lost love can be more hurtful than anything else. I love love love this poem!!! I hope everything gets better for you hun. :) |
| On April 23rd 2007 hackerlord Said: |
| me and hannah broken up :( |
