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Me and Hannah broke up s0 i felt this

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Am I Dreaming

Views (1078) Pain Created on 4-23-07 Flag
"Am I Dreaming"

Am i dreaming
Or is this real
I lost you?
I broken your heart,
Now I feel like quiting,
Ending this worthless life
And hiding in the darkness shadows.

Am I dreaming or is it true,
I was just with you,
Holding your heart,
I broken yours,
Now I also broken my own,
This is the end,
Of the world I live in.

Am I dreaming or is it a fact,
I made this burn?
Deep down where it hurts,
My body is melting with the pain,
I suscide my own life.

Am I dreaming or is it a saying,
That you was happy for us?
Answer that please!
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On June 22nd 2007 lollipopgurl14 Said :
lollipopgurl14 omg.. i love this poem.. your really great at writing :) ♥bree
On May 18th 2007 Pushpop09 Said :
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wow...i really like it. has alot of emotions in it. I can really relat to this. Keep writing.
On May 15th 2007 lavonea Said :
lavonea awww! i liked it! sorry to hear that u went though that but what doesnt kill ya makes u stronger!
On May 2nd 2007 baby101204 Said :
baby101204 you my friend, are a genius. Kudos.
On April 30th 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 EXCELLENT great Job
On April 28th 2007 Averex Said :
Averex Dude I have felt this same way before, except I couldnt put it into word as well as you did. Nice dude.
On April 26th 2007 pink23fairie Said :
pink23fairie Wow really good I love it =)
On April 24th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall Damn bro, thats some writing skilz man.
On April 24th 2007 nascott01 Said :
nascott01 it's a great poem. i'm sorry you guys broke up. stay strong :)
On April 24th 2007 Sydmon Said :
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Wow u are realy really good at writing. I am sorry that u and ur girl broke up I know how u feel trust me.
On April 23rd 2007 chrissey08h2 Said :
chrissey08h2 hannah* sorry i spelled it wrong
On April 23rd 2007 chrissey08h2 Said :
chrissey08h2 wow its very deep joshi.. but at the same time very beautiful.. u are very good at writing.. im sorry about u and hanna
On April 23rd 2007 runawaylove18 Said :
runawaylove18 awee im sorry
On April 23rd 2007 ssjscotty Said :
ssjscotty pretty deep indeed
On April 23rd 2007 blutess Said :
blutess sorry 2 hear bout ur break up.