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You have to make choices in life...Rate this Poem
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4 parts of the sea |
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Torment |
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Pushed to the brink |
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Sugar |
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What you mean to me |
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Not to be found |
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Nightmares |
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Stained Souls |
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Tilt |
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A quilts existence |
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Dry Ice |
Walk the straight line too long
My mind heads,
Down the hallway,
Lined by doors, Full of choices,
None I open, None I pick,
Stepping Straight,
Stumbling Forward,
Dizzy watching doors fade,
Hallway leads to narrow paths,
Never ending, Shadows grow,
Visions blurry, So confusing,
Shadows Moving,
I am Not,
Laughing taunts from the doors,
Pathway choosen locks you in,
Getting darker, Can't turn back,
Realization finally comes, Choices made too late,
Too much debating,
Life's Dissipating
| On June 21st 2008 username685 Said : | |
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i really enjoyed reading this.
keep up the good work^_^ |
| On June 17th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said : | |
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Hot Damn!!! Good Deal. You have come a long way dude/girl. Lol. Wat r u now? I never can figure that out. you have nothing on ur prof. |
| On June 15th 2008 reapersheart Said : | |
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i like that, thumbs up |


