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You have to make choices in life...

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Walk the straight line too long

Views (41) Other Created on 6-14-08 Flag

My mind heads,

Down the hallway,

Lined by doors, Full of choices,

None I open, None I pick,

                              Stepping Straight,

                              Stumbling Forward,

Dizzy watching doors fade,

Hallway leads to narrow paths,

Never ending, Shadows grow,

Visions blurry, So confusing,

                               Shadows Moving,

                                I am Not,

Laughing taunts from the doors,

Pathway choosen locks you in,

Getting darker, Can't turn back,

Realization finally comes, Choices made too late,

                               Too much debating,

                                Life's Dissipating

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On June 21st 2008 username685 Said :
username685 i really enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work^_^
On June 17th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 Hot Damn!!! Good Deal. You have come a long way dude/girl. Lol. Wat r u now? I never can figure that out. you have nothing on ur prof.
On June 15th 2008 reapersheart Said :
reapersheart i like that, thumbs up