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The living regret
The living regret
The hands of the clock on a wheel of sham tick back,
As I watch the train of memories race down the wrong track,
Like a re-run you watch the things you fear,
A rain drop is nothing to an unwanted salty tear,
Like velcro it pulls you apart and then will re-attach,
If only you could lock it away with a steel cold latch,
It's part of you and you will never forget,
Something intangible yet something you've met,
Meet, my dear, the living regret!
| On January 21st 2008 individulsong Said : | |
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This is really great. I like the way you wove your rhymes. So.... mysterious... |
| On December 26th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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amazing. I love how the words seem to blend in with the whole aspect of the poem and the flow is awesome, really good word choice |
| On December 17th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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wow, liked it, it was a very motivated poem, you did an amazing job! |
| On December 15th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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wowo i really like this. sry it took so long to check out. its awesome! i like ur word choice! |
| On December 12th 2007 piratesrule78 Said : | |
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i loved it |
| On December 12th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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This is really Creative and so true to how it feels. Wonderful work! |
| On December 11th 2007 username685 Said : | |
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oh wow i love it
this is great |
| On December 10th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Awesome! Great ideas! I can't pick one or two favorite spots, it's all so amazing! |


