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Created on 11-11-07
Salty tears flow down my cheek,
Feel that gentle slow release,
Making you so weak and sick,
I laugh happily to feel this,
A sharp pang shoots through your heart,
Skin crawls and your tears stop up,
A flash back of feeling nothing more.
Please Login to post comments| On November 12th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I really love this one; it reminds me of how I was feeling for quite a good while. All the emotions and feelings are captured perfectly. well done! |
| On November 12th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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i love this....very deep and emotional |
| On November 11th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Short, but so emotional! |
