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the pain

Views (102) Anger Created on 9-26-07 Flag

The pain, the sorrow in your eyes

The heartache, the tears as my heart dies

the blood, the death, my body, it lies

the pain and sorrow as you cry

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On October 17th 2007 wolfvalentine Said :
wolfvalentine excellent use of emotion
On October 12th 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb simple and short, love this!
On October 2nd 2007 lisajoann88 Said :
lisajoann88 i love it!
On September 29th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :
xxlostsoul14xx aw i like it, short but still strong with emotion