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Created on 9-19-07
im standing on the ledge
slowly approaching the edge
shall i jump and take that risk?
if i jump will i be missed?
i think about why i am here
living longer is what i fear
im so sick of this pain and sorrow
now i dont want to be here for tomorrow
the times i've broken down and cried
all the facts i've covered and lied
i've always hated the life i live
i have nothing left to give
im so sick of people putting me down
because of them my happiness drowned
i take one look of whats below
and now i know itd time to go
one more step then im gone
its over now my time is done
i finally take that last step
finally draw my last breath
i take one last look of whats around
and then i suddenly hit the ground. . .
slowly approaching the edge
shall i jump and take that risk?
if i jump will i be missed?
i think about why i am here
living longer is what i fear
im so sick of this pain and sorrow
now i dont want to be here for tomorrow
the times i've broken down and cried
all the facts i've covered and lied
i've always hated the life i live
i have nothing left to give
im so sick of people putting me down
because of them my happiness drowned
i take one look of whats below
and now i know itd time to go
one more step then im gone
its over now my time is done
i finally take that last step
finally draw my last breath
i take one last look of whats around
and then i suddenly hit the ground. . .
Please Login to post comments| On September 29th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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I like it! It reminds me of my poem "Suicidal Boy" |
| On September 20th 2007 DopeyLuvsMota Said : | |
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wow thats really deep. i like it though. it sounds like something i would write. but i learned not to let people bring me down. how i deal with it, im like fuck everyone it just shows how much they really care. |
| On September 19th 2007 cassnorton Said : | |
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sad |
