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The Storm

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The Storm moves in,

It's force yet unknown,

The Lightning has not struck,

The Winds have not Blown.

The Trees are still peaceful,

Their Limbs, still intact.

The Sky starts to Darken,

The Clouds, they turn Black.

The Lightning, it Flashes,

Afar in the Sky.

The Thunder, it Crashes,

Like a Train, rolling by.

Now the Wind starts Ablowing,

And the Trees start to Sway,

Harder and Harder,

Till the Limbs break Away.

Then comes the Rain,

Like Needles on Skin.

Let's Play in the Rain,

'Til the Sun Shines Again!!

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On August 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I loved this. Well done.
On August 13th 2008 ausjo Said :
ausjo Love it. Really pretty.
On July 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Aww man that just brought back so many memories for me. the flow, the word choice, nothing fancy just very well constructed. in short a Brilliant poem!
On July 16th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv I love the flow, the imagery, and the vocabulary. This is very beautiful. I love the matters of Mother Nature in poetry, because more often than not-they can also be looked at in the aspect of life. I love this! You're very creatively simple with your works, and I really enjoy reading all of them. :)
On July 16th 2008 Calypso32 Said :
Calypso32 Ohh, I did enjoy this, the imagery is top rate, great work Gonzo!~L
On July 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem That was awesome! :)
On July 15th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ aww this was goo Gonzo, wtg!
On July 15th 2008 ChymeraxeSOH Said :
ChymeraxeSOH It flowed perfectly. I loved it, sometimes you rhymed, others you didn't. Random is sometimes better. Didn't expect the last two lines, great job! :D