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Siren Song

Views (235) Other Created on 6-17-08 Flag
 

I hear the Siren sing her song,

As I sail these stormy seas.

I've been stranded way to long,

Her voice puts me at ease.

The seas, they seem so endless

There is no land in sight.

But the song of my enchantress,

Helps get me through the night.

I know I must ignore Her call,

These seas will be calm soon.

But as the waves, they rise and fall,

Again, I hear her Tune.

Her angelic voice, it beckons me,

By now, I'm much too weak.

No longer can I fight this Sea,

My boat has sprung a leak.

Should I stay, aboard this boat,

Where I'd surely drown,

Or hope that I can stay afloat,

and swim towards that lovely sound?

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On September 2nd 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage Another Good one, Im glad you asked me to check out some of your stuff I've enjoyed what I've read so far
On August 26th 2008 LeahLive Said :
LeahLive Will there be a part 2 for this? I'd love to know what happens! I love the suspense. Not sure if it's intended to be there though.
On August 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Commented before! lol I said "This is wonderful. Very imaginative! ~Kudos~ :)"
On June 24th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv I love this difference in style from you. It's a softer, more intimate poem. I love it! Very beautiful and simple. Hidden meanings maybe?
On June 23rd 2008 icemoon Said :
icemoon It's a beautiful poem. Don't stop being inspired.
On June 23rd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I wonder what inspired this one? Does it reflect some piece of you that I don’t know about? I thought it was wonderful!!! You are so much more a poet than you give yourself credit for. Keep em comin’!
On June 20th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Fantastic.
On June 20th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ wow Gonzo, this was AMAZING. Im very proud of you :D. Nice job hun, keep up the good work!
On June 19th 2008 HeathaJo Said :
HeathaJo this is good
On June 18th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster no, no, no, this isnt the siren song, the siren song goes like, "WEEE WOOOO WEEEEE WOOOO WEEEE WOOO!!!!"
On June 18th 2008 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 This is absolutely beautiful :)
On June 18th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Grrr... anmost=almost
On June 18th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Loved this one. The flow was anmost melodic in itself, if that makes sense.

Really enjoyed reading this one
On June 17th 2008 Kdanae88 Said :
Kdanae88 I agree with everyone! This poem was beautiful and flowed perfectly together! Kmp on more of your work!
On June 17th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 oh wow. this was lovely and flowed really well. loved it!!!!
On June 17th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Different tunes to cling to~ I loved it alot~
On June 17th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb Indeed this is beautiful! I absolutely love this poem! Well done!!
On June 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is wonderful. Very imaginative! ~Kudos~ :)
On June 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 if u had shipmates u could have them place wax in thier ears and bind u to the ships main mast so u can get close but not too close to hear their beautiful melody and live to tell the tale....great reference and i get what is being said behind these words.....when u feel emotions are leaving u undecided. place those aside if u can and look at pure fact. the truth will always be there and emotions and deed seeded feelings can often cloud an otherwise impartial judgement. ur about to be the third male to get this from me....in a totally hetero way of course...*Huggles*
On June 17th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet this was beautifulll, one of my favorites from you G.