gonzo4201

This is a poem I wrote about/for my son

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Young Prince

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Created on 12-2-07

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Young prince, gentle and pure,

This cruel world, He shall endure.

Gentle King and Evil Queen,

She banished Him, and reigned Supreme.

Until the day the King returned,

The Prince came home, the Queen was burned.

Back Home, in the Castle of the King,

They met an Angel and Daughters, as beautiful as can be.

She married the King, His Mother She became.

They knew Their lives would forever be changed.

Now the Prince has two Sisters, and a Mother to love,

Even love from a Brother, who watches from above.

Now everyone's happy, Their hearts full of Joy,

The Prince will be King one day, but for now He's my Boy.

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On August 10th 2008 ERCxC2008 Said :

	I love this... It's a beautiful work and I'm sure it's treasured by your son...

On July 24th 2008 CassieZ Said :

	awww that was so adorable Gonzo :D

On June 28th 2008 Calypso32 Said :

	Wow...I like the way you channeled the real life into a poetical situation. Those with mixed families could reap a great bounty from reading this. bravo!~L

On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	this was pretty cool!

On February 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	aww~ this one's sweet. hugs

On February 19th 2008 joabizz Said :

	very creative!! and beautiful poem about your son!!! I sooooo loved it!!

On February 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	Evil Queen? EX perhaps? haha This was very good. I enjoyed reading it and I am sure your son will treasure it. Did you lose a son? You referenced one watching from above. I'm sorry for your loss if this is fact based. :( Peace be with him.

On February 4th 2008 madmarcus Said :

	Epic badassness! ( if thats not a word it should be)

On December 25th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :

	aww love this!

On December 21st 2007 vernathome Said :

	Ye hath faired well my friend,

On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :

	this is cool..i like it