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Will You Be There?
When you're down and blue,
I'm the one you turn to,
Cause you know that I'm a true friend,
Always there until the end.
But when it's all said and done,
I feel like I have no one,
To share these feelings inside me with.
Each day brings me closer to my death.
I asked you to come by,
Never gave a reason why.
You told me that you'd be here.
When I needed you, you weren't there.
You left me hanging and now so must I,
You left me alone, you left me to die.
| On June 27th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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GASP. This was so wonderful~
^^
I fell in love w/ this one. :]
Sad, but just great. |
| On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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aww almost made me cry! I can relate to it in a way keep up the awsome work! |
| On February 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Amazing piece~ I like reading your poetry. It's different. |
| On February 19th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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I really love this one as well!!! you are very good... I know the sentiment all too well, I know that one of my reasons being here on earth is to listen and help as many, but when you need someone anyone lol,, no one is home.... :-( |
| On February 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Whaaaaaaa Very sad. Nice display of emotion though. (((((BIGFATHUG))))) |
| On January 2nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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wow this is so me get outta my head lol!! |
| On December 31st 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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I felt this at times, wow, great poem. |
| On December 21st 2007 vernathome Said : | |
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I like it a lot poignant and concise |
| On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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shit...wow...i do know how it feels to be alone. i like this. |
| On November 30th 2007 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Great poem! Definitely the type of thing I like and can relate to. |


