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Til Death Do Us Part
He says he loves her,
As he walks out the door.
He leaves her crying,
Lying upon the bedroom floor.
He don't know what's going on,
His brain keeps tick, tick, ticking like a bomb.
He knows he loves her,
But in his head he wonders,
Could there be more,
To these feelings he has for another?
As he thinks, he drives,
The pedal presses the floor,
Faster and faster, his car starts to roar,
He cranks the radio,
To drown her cries in his head,
Til death do us part,
That's what he said.
So faster and faster, and further he drives,
He's lost all reason to stay alive.
The woman he loves, loves him no more,
At least that's what she said, as he walked out the door.
He can't change the past, and he did do her wrong,
He just wants to go back, to where he belongs.
Back in her arms, where again he'll never be,
Thinking of this, he aims for a tree.
Til Death Do Us Part,
That's what he had said,
That was the last thought,
To go through his head.
| On April 24th 2008 Dark197 Said : | |
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It's sad. But I like it. |
| On March 13th 2008 Kep89 Said : | |
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OMg.....................
i love it sooo much. theres just something about it. |
| On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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that's a shame....no one should be in that situation. but love how the flow is |
| On February 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I LOVE THIS~ It speaks so loud. Effing brilliant~ |
| On February 19th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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oh wow,,, Omg!! hmmmm I am trying to gather words,, *thats a good thing* lol, It was very sad, but I am sure so many can relate!!! |
| On February 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Whoa! Man that was a wild ride. The little head was thinking when he walked out the door, then the big head took over and the battle ensued, Big head won but no turning back. SMASH right into the tree. |
| On February 4th 2008 madmarcus Said : | |
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It has the kind of romantic passion that scares most of us. |
| On December 28th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Sad how that saying can become true at times in an unfortunate way, well done! |
| On December 18th 2007 Snooky9e Said : | |
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awww...poor thing... |
| On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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hmmmm. wow...nicely done. |


