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Consumed
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Created on 11-22-07
I..... can't Escape.
Consumed..... by Hate.
Why..... am I Here?
Consumed.....by Fear.
You....say you love Me,
And.....you will never Leave.
They.....say they are my Friends,
There....til the End.
Why am I Laying....here all Alone?
The only Voice....I hear is my Own.
Screaming.....in Silence,
Driving.....me Mad,
No one.....can Help me,
Not Even.....my Dad.
I'm.....all alone Here,
Just.....want to be Free.
This.....is my one Fear,
Consumed.....and Lonely.
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow oh wow i felt the emotions in there....seems like a lot of pain |
| On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Really brilliant in rhyming~ I like it. |
| On February 19th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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I agree with June!! lol,, When I feel like S***, I get up and DANCE!!!! only in my house of course..lol |
| On February 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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You're only alone 'til ya get there. Put some dancin' shoes on and go out! :) You're a very good writer. Don't mind my silly comments. I'm just a silly girl. |
| On January 2nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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nice! |
| On December 31st 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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wow, rather impressive poem, a lot of emotion. |
| On December 19th 2007 vernathome Said : | |
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I feel the emptyness |
| On December 15th 2007 DreamCarly Said : | |
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This def. has a very dark outlook on life, or maybe an experience, but I like it. |
| On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i can relate to the despair in this. |
