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Moshpit

Views (213) Passion Created on 11-22-07 Flag

Music flowin through my veins,

Just reach out and cause some pain.

A punch to the face and a knee to the jaw,

Heads hit heads, the weaker ones fall.

Pick em up, move em out,

Keep the pit going, don't quit now.

I wipe the blood out from my eye,

Then run back with a kamikaze cry.

Crack some heads, stomp some shins,

I can't wait til the music begins.

I'm the first one in, the last one out,

Moshing's what I'm all about.

If I don't git hurt it wasn't that good,

But Damn ya shoulda seen the other dude.

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On August 26th 2008 LeahLive Said :
LeahLive Hahaha! I'm not a moshpit 'dancer' but rather a 'watcher'. I loved how you described it.
On June 10th 2008 darkbabylon13 Said :
darkbabylon13 nice poem... sounds like me in a mosh...LOL
On March 13th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 hhahahah you caught it perfectly, but hey the little ones dont always fall. I musta been the smallest thing in there. Sad thing is i only walked away with bruised legs. i was too short for them to hit my face lol.
On March 3rd 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I liked the poem-you did a great job w/ creating a little scene in my mind~
On February 26th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 haha love it!! Moshing rules but my tiny body will get killed lol
On February 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I get squished to death in the damn mosh pit~ there's a lot of "who's rubbing my ass" going on in my head too. lol tmi~ yay for the mosh pits!
On February 23rd 2008 bygmyke Said :
bygmyke Dude i F ing love it!!! it gets me pumped!!!
On February 22nd 2008 AshleyXxPiano Said :
AshleyXxPiano i like it =)
On February 19th 2008 joabizz Said :
joabizz Mosh Pits are scary!!! I was trapped in one by accident and scared out of my mind... lol
On February 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I went to the mosh pit once. DRUNK 10 foot tall and bullet proof though. Bring it on!!! haha I held my own. (flexes muscle)
On January 15th 2008 ANNO22 Said :
ANNO22 Yeah, soo true... loving the rep to the beat down..
On January 7th 2008 NisaNicole Said :
NisaNicole Haha, I like the way this poem rhymed. It wasn't cheesy...and it all fit together perfectly. :D
On December 31st 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb lol haha, I scrolled back up to see what it was under, passion, hmmmm..=P, well done!
On December 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 lmao everyone mosh it up lol.