Created By
Rate this Poem
Info
Created:
06/07 2009
Views:
651
Category:
Respect
My Poems
|
+
15
|
Cross the Line |
|
+
26
|
Success? |
|
+
11
|
Looking Up |
|
+
50
|
Corruption Gun |
Corruption Gun
I’ve got the blueprints for corruption,
so you bring the escape.
I’ll shake hands with the moral assassin:
The bouncer at heaven’s gates.
Six feet under’s not enough.
In goes the chemicals,
out comes the obscenities.
This house holds the wasted,
selfish fucks of mutiny.
We are the trash, the scum,
the criminals pacing the streets.
I’ll leave when I’m dead,
first need time to slur some senseless speech.
Soon the stumbles are gone, the substances too.
Woke up on the lawn, now there’s nothing to do.
Back to the old ways: Dazed, just like the old days.
The price is fair,
the deal is done.
Assassin, shoot me in the head
with your corruption gun.
| On November 13th 2009 Christina41 Said: |
|
| love. absolutely love. |
| On August 16th 2009 cherrypie1440 Said: |
|
| ur poetry is corruption in the best wayy |
| On August 7th 2009 spazfosho Said: |
|
| DRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNKKKK!(: haha |
| On August 1st 2009 make4scene Said: |
|
| wow your amazing at writing poetry, i love this |
| On July 23rd 2009 JWalker2406 Said: |
|
| Sorry I haven't read this yet...But wow! You have got some talent girl!!! You are right, this isn't like most of the poems on here, including my crappy ones lol. I'm jealous! You keep at it!!! :) |
| On July 14th 2009 KIRKME Said: |
|
| AAAAAAAHHHHHHH! you are great :D |
| On July 4th 2009 ALIESAM21 Said: |
|
| wow that was very raw. Very good. |
| On July 4th 2009 sexierth3nu Said: |
|
| I loved it : c4c r4r |
| On June 24th 2009 yabria Said: |
|
| I love the words... It brings the world to life. Great job! =) |
| On June 22nd 2009 nigachan Said: |
|
| i like it:) |
| On June 18th 2009 Brianaaaaxoxo Said: |
|
| itts goooooooood(: |
| On June 18th 2009 aracz101 Said: |
|
| nice nice, lovin the style, good use of words, pretty much this poem is the jizz *thats awesome btw* lol |
| On June 16th 2009 CassieZ Said: |
|
| wow, this was really good :) nice job. |
| On June 16th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
|
| I love your style. This is really good. |
| On June 15th 2009 avrilnstreak Said: |
|
| woops! forgot to comment wen i read it.its a really good poem keep at it ^_^
~lauren~ |
| On June 14th 2009 Crunkgirl777 Said: |
|
| its good =) |
| On June 13th 2009 transgenic Said: |
|
| Powerful. I'm amazed. |
| On June 12th 2009 ashleylee42 Said: |
|
| i love it, its seriously amazing(: |
| On June 11th 2009 KaytlynnMM Said: |
|
| nice job |
| On June 10th 2009 shello6183 Said: |
|
| This is really very great!! |
| On June 9th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
|
| i want to say more than an obligatory wow but i have having trouble articulating what i want to say currently so that i hope will suffice |
| On June 9th 2009 OreosGoRawr Said: |
|
| Whoaa! That's really good! |
| On June 9th 2009 brosbestfrien1 Said: |
|
| pretty cool I likes it XD |
| On June 8th 2009 Yanks19 Said: |
|
| nice i love the poem haha
like the styleeeee |
| On June 8th 2009 demonica666 Said: |
|
| extremely good job. Gratz |


