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Created: 05/31 2009
Views: 169
Category: Respect

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Looking Up

Looked up from my feet

to the tops of the trees.

Something's new:

Since when can I breathe?

Thats new, I can see.

Guess this story's neverending.

 

Looked up from my feet

and saw nothing but air.

I'm on top of the world.

Knock me down

and I'll turn upside down

so the world will stay beneath me.

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On July 4th 2009 sexierth3nu Said: 
sexierth3nu You should do a deut with lil wayne haahh jk but nicely done
On June 17th 2009 heybooily Said: 
heybooily wow this is amazing. keep it up! =D
On June 9th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 very interesting
On June 8th 2009 audica Said: 
audica i like it. i do i do i do. :)
On June 1st 2009 Poglu Said: 
Poglu cool =]
On May 31st 2009 NitneyRenee Said: 
NitneyRenee really like this!
On May 31st 2009 MysteryArtist8 Said: 
MysteryArtist8 yaaah!!