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Created: 05/31 2009
Views: 445
Category: Respect

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Success?

Through this win you've lost the war.

Go cash that paycheck,

Say no more.

Never get payback,

Never look back.

 

Handshakes with one hand,

Briefcase in the other.

Long hours,

Long walk home,

Long awaited rest.

Morning comes,

Time to do it again.

Success got the best of you.

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On November 7th 2009 Shades0fhell Said: 
Shades0fhell its short and good . Greatly enjoyed reading it =) GJ
On July 20th 2009 belenlovespooh Said: 
belenlovespooh verry nice writting,sound lik you put great thought and emotion to it :] gj
On July 18th 2009 bluerose01 Said: 
bluerose01 this is good
On June 26th 2009 nigachan Said: 
nigachan its reall good i like it.
On June 8th 2009 audica Said: 
audica i like this one alot. great job.
On June 8th 2009 idreambig Said: 
idreambig so detailed and yet simple. you say a thousand meanings with one word. i like it a lot. +
On June 7th 2009 IrePilot Said: 
IrePilot wow, the working man (or woman) trapped in society's hold..."men lead lives of quiet desperation"-thoreau very nice, made me think of Thoreau
On June 4th 2009 avrilnstreak Said: 
avrilnstreak very nice poem
On June 3rd 2009 Mokasan534 Said: 
Mokasan534 omfg. thats the best thing i've ever seen!! you should try to get this publeshed!
On June 3rd 2009 barbarian1 Said: 
barbarian1 nice poem
On June 1st 2009 samsyoman3 Said: 
samsyoman3 damn. thats so true!
On June 1st 2009 Poglu Said: 
Poglu So True!!! Great job!!!
On June 1st 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx I like it :)
On May 31st 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX http://www.testriffic.com/social/contests/68885
On May 31st 2009 brosbestfrien1 Said: 
brosbestfrien1 good XD
On May 31st 2009 NitneyRenee Said: 
NitneyRenee pretty good... well written.
On May 31st 2009 KaytlynnMM Said: 
KaytlynnMM nice job
On May 31st 2009 WTFWJD2 Said: 
WTFWJD2 very well written
On May 31st 2009 leahspugs Said: 
leahspugs wow! good job..Its really nice.:)
On May 31st 2009 LaurenLozX Said: 
LaurenLozX Nice :)
On May 31st 2009 MysteryArtist8 Said: 
MysteryArtist8 Wow, this is actually really great! Thanks for sharing~ keep em comin'
On May 31st 2009 supertaurusgal Said: 
supertaurusgal Cool =D i like it
On May 31st 2009 aracz101 Said: 
aracz101 well, the meaning is clear, and yes i know you said it was short, but different words couldve helped, liked endless hours, or the 10 mile walk home
On May 31st 2009 getcorrupted Said: 
getcorrupted mm, keep in mind that this is just a shorty i whipped up in like 20 minutes, haha. usually it would be longer.
On May 31st 2009 makemebreakme5 Said: 
makemebreakme5 really good!