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Mm, this is from my old account. Enjoy!Rate this Poem
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Created:
05/30 2009
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223
Category:
Love
My Poems
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Cross the Line |
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Cross the Line
I'll smash the clock,
you grap the chalk.
We'll sit on the sidewalk.
Quiet, no time for talk.
Draw a line between us;
then we rebel.
Take my hand,
we'll cross this line and go to hell.
We're here now,
or maybe not.
The sky cleared up,
and it's not even hot.
We're the ones higher.
It's just you and me.
Finally escaped those liars;
finally we're free.
Wished for motion;
got it with that coin and that well.
We're burning with passion,
not burning in hell.
| On September 21st 2009 HaloBlackGuy Said: |
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| I like this very good!! |
| On July 4th 2009 sexierth3nu Said: |
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| This ones even better |
| On June 18th 2009 Marissa2233 Said: |
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| Wow this is amazing!!! |
| On June 9th 2009 idreambig Said: |
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| like the flow, it's freaking good. |
| On June 8th 2009 audica Said: |
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| i loved the last two lines. this is good, but not one of your best. i liked it alot, but i know you can do better. |
| On June 1st 2009 Poglu Said: |
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| So cool :D Really imaginative... A great piece of work =] |
| On May 31st 2009 NitneyRenee Said: |
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| On May 31st 2009 leahspugs Said: |
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| My favorite!!! love it alot. |
| On May 31st 2009 MysteryArtist8 Said: |
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| I like!! |
| On May 31st 2009 supertaurusgal Said: |
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| I like this poem, its good XD |


