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Gentle Rain
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Created on 2-17-07
Falling like a gentle rain
Slanted with the wind
Dripping off of moistened eves
sliding down this drain
This love was burning, give speed
We went upon our way
Like leaves we caught and blase'd so bright
Felt desire like a need
How did this rain consume our fire?
This smoke and ashes left
Our love is falling, sliding still
Consumed by drains of ire
I thought this love could hold the world
Could stay this life's tirade
Our love was brilliant, hearts so bold
A bleeding trail unfurled
Now our way is unsure at best
She says lets parts our ways
Why hold on the way I do
Why not just let it rest
Please Login to post comments| On August 4th 2007 stubishead Said : | |
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wow. you have such a talent! |
| On May 27th 2007 Spikecollecter Said : | |
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good job |
| On May 7th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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nice |
| On April 22nd 2007 hiscuntpwns Said : | |
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beautiful |
| On February 22nd 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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Very nice, the song I'm listening to right now fits almost perfectly with these words as well, kinda weird...like a camera going in and out of focus...only with words :) |
