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Created on 12-15-06
FINDING THRILLS TO FILL A SPACE
AN UNEXPECTED GIFT
TAKING PLEASURE FROM WAYWARD FRIENDS
SLOWLY GIVING TO DRIFT
SLIDING INTO INFINITE SPACE
WALLS ARE FOLDING OUTWARD
GAINING GROUND ON LEVITOUS THOUGHTS
BEFORE THIS SEEMED SO AWKWARD
HE GAVE ME A PILL BEFORE I LEFT
I WOKE UP COLD AND LONELY
SMALL IN WHITES, A HOSPITAL ROOM
MY LAST THOUGHTS NOW, IF ONLY
Please Login to post comments| On April 18th 2007 v3nusfly Said : | |
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deep. Been there sadly,... |
| On April 10th 2007 PirateParker Said : | |
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Wow, I know how this feels in a way. I really like the poem. |
| On January 4th 2007 hiscuntpwns Said : | |
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how sad. this reminds me of all the junkies i know. [not that im one myself, i jst happen to know a lot of them.] i like the way you described pills and all that blah blah blah -ness. good poetry. |
| On December 22nd 2006 tinkerbell8794 Said : | |
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I think this is really good. How did you come up with this? What was your inspiration? Did you write this because of something you experianced? Please message me with your answers. |
