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Created on 12-13-06
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Please Login to post comments| On April 6th 2007 XxNightHavenxX Said : | |
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ahhahah...no...i dont think it matters....and what kuruisakebu said is true....but then again...not even she really has it....thats only half of it....haikus can still be written differently cause the languages are WAY to different....
if you want to know a the true patters, go decipher a japanese haiku. its so much easier than arguing with one another...
btw...great haiku~.^ |
| On February 17th 2007 RoxyLaLauren22 Said : | |
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who cares if it wasn't the actual 5-7-5 thing. it's still a cool poem either way. good job. the count would probably be 3-4-1 but it doesn't matter.
some people are just too picky. |
| On January 26th 2007 kuruisakebu Said : | |
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haikus are 5-7-5, and translated in japanese it would be
kagayakashii metsuki wa (9)
to kochibiru (5)
kara ochirimasu (7)
thats the actual, a direct would be 7-9-5. and abeardforbirds, you know nothing of the japanese language |
| On January 3rd 2007 abeardforbirds Said : | |
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japanese sound units do not translate well into english syllables, so the 17 sound units the japanese use would be more like 10 syllables or less in english. using that as the criteria, this is an excellent haiku |
| On January 3rd 2007 gabbes Said : | |
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does it matter? |
| On December 28th 2006 Smellygoat12 Said : | |
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was that haiku? its a brilliant poem but my syllable count was 5-5-2 |
