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Created on 12-13-06
Whispers of spring
Cherry blossom sweet
seasons
Please Login to post comments| On September 19th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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It's a good poem, but in order for it to be a haiku, you've got to finish the last line...Maybe "Seasons are changing" or something like that...Just a suggestion... |
| On July 31st 2007 kearlgirl Said : | |
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hmm. well, i guess i'll have to join the ranks of the jerks when i say that this is NOT a haiku and the person who says we are jerks can't even spell haiku correctly, and yes, I CAN pronounce haiku
(HI-KOO) It might be better for her to explain herself and what this pattern is all about. It would appear that she got a good start, just needs to finish it out completely. |
| On July 25th 2007 Funployee13 Said : | |
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Sorry, but they do have a point its 5-7-5 not 5-7-2. |
| On May 13th 2007 Jipushi Said : | |
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Will you two jerks give her a rest?
It's a hiaku and it's bloody marvelous.
Do you even know how to pronounce hiaku? |
| On February 13th 2007 AmbrosiaMcD Said : | |
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That girl is dumb. Way to write a poem. |
| On January 26th 2007 kuruisakebu Said : | |
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stop putting these in the haiku section. you suck at writing (5). the simplest of haikus(7). give up already (5). simple as that |
| On January 3rd 2007 kokobellies Said : | |
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AWESOME! |
