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Created on 8-27-07
Inside me lies a bitter man, crying out for fire
Inside me hides a sinner man, tell me i'm a lier
Death is no more fuller than, the moon that shines at night
Will I become a killer man, my ways to fight this spite
Christen me a bigger man, burned by all the fire
Hope for me a better man, I know I walk the wire
Sink in me the sharper span, the knife thats never dull
Drink with me you tiller man, you men who work and cull
Fight with me to be a man, give me all your strength
I'll fight to make you more a man, I'll pull your rope one length
Give to me a tarriff ban, shut me down tonight
See in me the weaker man, i'll never be alright
Inside me hides a sinner man, tell me i'm a lier
Death is no more fuller than, the moon that shines at night
Will I become a killer man, my ways to fight this spite
Christen me a bigger man, burned by all the fire
Hope for me a better man, I know I walk the wire
Sink in me the sharper span, the knife thats never dull
Drink with me you tiller man, you men who work and cull
Fight with me to be a man, give me all your strength
I'll fight to make you more a man, I'll pull your rope one length
Give to me a tarriff ban, shut me down tonight
See in me the weaker man, i'll never be alright
Please Login to post comments| On September 20th 2008 ausjo Said : | |
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Excellent bit of writing. Flows really nicely and really drew me in. Good one! |
| On August 30th 2008 kitkat298 Said : | |
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speechless...Lawl...okay...writeless?makes no sense |
| On August 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Wow, I love this. The work of yours that I've read so far has a beautiful Celtic ring to it. |
| On August 27th 2007 emorockgrl333 Said : | |
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i love it (only saying it cuz everything makes me speechless and it was the first thing that came to mind) |
