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What I've Lost

Views (67990) Love Created on 6-30-06 Flag

Why does it hurt so bad?

To lose something I never had.

To have these feelings and nothing to do.

Just to sit around and wait for you.

Why is it hard to move on?

When all my feelings for you should be gone.

In my soul when you are around.

Your name is a beautiful sound.

Now all I can do is wonder

How I lost it all in a blunder.

By not telling you how I feel,

Trying to act like it's no big deal.

Now I know the nature of my errors

I just wish I can get rid of my cares

Yet I know my heart won't let me

Get rid of the person who fills me with glee.

Just by hearing your sweet name

Knowing my feeling for you are just the same.

I must move on to a new life.

Leaving behind the feelings and strife.

I am only human and I am weak,

But for you, there was a beautiful streak.

I would do anything to repeat that day,

When you hung on my words waiting to say.

Now I am on a new track,

Knowing that I can't have you back.

No matter what I do or how hard I try

All I can say to you now...is........good-bye.

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On September 15th 2008 merck12 Said :
merck12 love it...:)
On September 13th 2008 000coffee000 Said :
000coffee000 This reminds me of the person I respect most in life T_T
On September 4th 2008 xxxshylaxxx Said :
xxxshylaxxx i love it its really sad tho =[ but sad poems are good most of the time...=[
On August 14th 2008 kmk5487 Said :
kmk5487 wow i like it alot kmp on ur other poems!
On July 28th 2008 allizawesome Said :
allizawesome this is so sad... and i can completely relate to it. beautifully written.
On July 22nd 2008 Natalyi Said :
Natalyi I loved it... I don't care what they say about you.
On July 22nd 2008 Natalyi Said :
Natalyi I loved it... I don't care what they say about you.
On July 7th 2008 Carolgreen Said :
Carolgreen hey ppl, sorry bot that crazy comment b4...i was jus serious...sum ppl do needa chill
On June 22nd 2008 Jenroxx Said :
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omfg i love this one idk how many i have wrote trying to say just that and it kinda sumed it all up
On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs awesome! check out mine
On June 19th 2008 VbBbTrackE03 Said :
VbBbTrackE03 Nice rhyme scheme, great emotion, it got off rhythm a few times, but still good
On June 19th 2008 HannieJo Said :
HannieJo beautiful, but if u DID copy it u should at least give the other guy credit.
On June 16th 2008 Jmaster423 Said :
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dude i used 2 feel like this 2 but if u just wait eventually tha feeling will go away good luck getting over her
On June 15th 2008 ashlovesjohn Said :
ashlovesjohn Fake.
On June 13th 2008 dlh11211988 Said :
dlh11211988 i kind of agree with katielady1. i don't think it's that big of a deal if you cut and paste... but at least give the person who actually did the real work credit. put down somewhere a little bibliography or something. don't just copy, paste, and let everyone think its your work.
On June 10th 2008 katielady1 Said :
katielady1 You know what? I dont care what anybody says. i cut and paste. I think that the more ppl who paste the better because that way you spead something wonderful to everyone else. I have cut and pasted befor, but i dont take credit.
On June 9th 2008 Muzik005 Said :
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not bad bro
On June 8th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE Wow, i absolutely love it
On June 4th 2008 Carolgreen Said :
Carolgreen damn, yall needa chill out, its just a damn poem and a damn site. no need to get all seriou on her ass. its not a big deal, and obviusly she is quite smarter than ur dumb asses . at least she got the highes ratd poem on this site, doesnt matter how, SHE STILL DID. so get over yall selves and get off her dick
On June 2nd 2008 brc93 Said :
brc93 God People!! You act as if she's the only person on this whole cite to copywrite. Get over it. "If you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."
On May 24th 2008 RodneyGiovanni Said :
RodneyGiovanni So this is the highest rated poem on this site? Hmm... It's no Tennyson or Browning, that's for sure. Also, did this guy really steal this lyric from somewhere?
On May 20th 2008 Ricanchick12 Said :
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I can totally relate 2 dis..............i know how it feels 2 go through dis...........n if dis is truly how u feel den it will b ok trust me.....jus never regret anything nd keep all memories close 2 ur heart........
On May 19th 2008 mysecret66 Said :
mysecret66 well... it's kinda cool that you are familiar with Craig Harrell and his poem "Fool like me" and you know how to cut and paste. I will give you a little credit though...because after all you DID change the last line... Bravo. For anyone that wants to read the pure original version go to http://www.netpoets.com/poems/sadlove/0677001.htm
On May 11th 2008 Myelvre1 Said :
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umm...that was...weird. i mean im 13 and i dont get it because im not oldish so yeah...sorry. but...i dont like it. AND CUZ YOU STOLE IT FROM A SONG!!!!! COPYWRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS CALLED FOOL LIKE ME SO YOU BEST BE TELLIN EVERYONE THAT YOU COPIED IT!!!!!!
On May 7th 2008 Ihatemyself13 Said :
Ihatemyself13 wow..it really beautiful