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What Can I Do?

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What can I say to make you mine?

When I was the one who said, "Falling in love is a waste of time."

I know you were left with no choice at all,

I turned cold and built a strong wall.

Who would've thought I'd ask you to stay.

When all I did was push you away.

Can someone tell me how to make you mine?

Each day we're apart I feel I'm running out of time.

I should've given you my all when I had the chance

Now all I have are memories of our failed romance.

My heart can't seem to move on,

When all my feelings for you should be gone.

Come back to me and take this loneliness away,

Since you've been gone, I've been thinking, why'd I let my angel get away?

I do miss you from the depth of my soul,

Everything in my world is now out of control.

What can I say to make you mine?

If you come back to me, I won't let you go this time.

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On April 26th 2008 junaica Said :
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it make's me cry...
On January 3rd 2008 f2daerg2i2e Said :
f2daerg2i2e this is MUCH better than that one with 37256234541075134780 ratings
On December 1st 2007 AshleyHaley19 Said :
AshleyHaley19 so sad
On September 19th 2007 sabrina225 Said :
sabrina225 tear jerker love it though
On August 26th 2007 jsisastara Said :
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man i love your work. all your stuff is jus really great!!!!!!!!!
On July 28th 2007 naenae765 Said :
naenae765 You get really deep in this poem, thats a good thing!
On April 18th 2007 monkeydee22 Said :
monkeydee22 Great! It has rhythem and it flows... Good job. ~Vampire~
On March 15th 2007 Cricket1989 Said :
Cricket1989 It's beautiful. I can really relate to it.
On March 5th 2007 neomud Said :
neomud I agree with lady ash. This poem would make for good lyrics
On February 25th 2007 Nerdwoman Said :
Nerdwoman aweeeee!!! I like it.
On February 20th 2007 krissyblair Said :
krissyblair this i love it's good amazing very well put together is has emotion and you can feel it i love this!
On February 19th 2007 reinouye Said :
reinouye haha its like a sappy love rap.
On February 19th 2007 reinouye Said :
reinouye haha its like a sappy love rap.
On February 15th 2007 ima1friend Said :
ima1friend This is so good i love the way you put your words together i love to write poems i have some on this Testriffic thing but i have more i feel like they should not be read by anyone...
On December 14th 2006 JohnKim Said :
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Who would've thought I'd ask you to stay. When all I did was push you away. that is my favorite line
On November 26th 2006 monkeygurl111 Said :
monkeygurl111 this is so sweet
On August 23rd 2006 lrnashley Said :
lrnashley I think this poem is really good if your into music you should check out a song called Words I Couldn't say by Rascal Flatts I love it maybe you will too!