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To You, Whom I Love So Dearly

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Being with you brings joy to my heart,

Seeing you is only just the start.

You're more precious than diamonds, and more costly then gold,

Your beauty is a sight to behold.

I'll be there for you when you're down,

Even when you're in your wedding gown.

I'll do my best to treat you well,

Because life without you is just like hell.

Before we met I used to stare,

You'd look back but it's a glare.

I tried to speak but words won't come,

So you just passed by and I felt dumb.

All this was before we met,

We now go out the pieces are set.

I can only hope it ends in a draw,

If it doesn't this might be our last straw.

When we part I always wish,

Our partings end with a kiss.

I always hope you'll be there,

Through all the good times we can share.

I stare at your eyes wondering what to find,

You know I'll cry if you leave from my mind.

Now you know how much I love you ,

Now I'm wondering if you love me too.

 

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On August 6th 2008 Doublecheck Said :
Doublecheck You are really good at rhyming poems, awesome man!
On April 26th 2008 junaica Said :
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a lot of words...making me dizzy but it has big meaning through and through...love it...fantastic...
On December 1st 2007 AshleyHaley19 Said :
AshleyHaley19 great poem
On June 23rd 2007 XpyromaniacX64 Said :
XpyromaniacX64 this poem brought tears to my eyes, really good job^^
On June 13th 2007 INDAY90 Said :
INDAY90 DIS POEM WELL ACTUALLY ALL UR POEMS SHOULD BE #1.. DEY SO BRING TEARS IN MY EYES IF NOT THEN IN THE INSIDE... IT WAS GREAT... IT RESEMBLES TO ME..... UR GOOD AT MAKIN POEMS U SHOULD MAKE A BOOK OF POEMS AND PUBLISH IT OR SUM THIN LYK DAT.... LATERZ PNAY_BIKER
On June 11th 2007 danielle54321 Said :
danielle54321 awww this is heart melting!
On May 31st 2007 Johanne93 Said :
Johanne93 dude...i don't even know what to say....you should just be famous. Your poetry rocks!
On May 24th 2007 ForAngelSaken Said :
ForAngelSaken This is a Great ONE, guys with Soul always have the Best Words
On April 11th 2007 sandevil Said :
sandevil very good
On March 25th 2007 midwaymaude Said :
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I just loved this.Very heartfelt write.
On March 24th 2007 wwdewolf Said :
wwdewolf I agree with Elicite.
On March 18th 2007 ButifUlLuCY Said :
ButifUlLuCY I really liked this poem and great job on it...it is very sweet
On March 15th 2007 Dani15C Said :
Dani15C Thats so sweet, good work!
On March 13th 2007 Jordyn713 Said :
Jordyn713 it was pretty good...check mine out plz!! tell me what you think
On March 13th 2007 demicrowther Said :
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this is great
On March 7th 2007 jenkywenky Said :
jenkywenky elicite. i soooooooooooooooo agree.
On March 6th 2007 Elicite Said :
Elicite Does anyone in this place even respect real poetry? How did you get top rated? I mean i appreciate your effort and maybe i'm just grumpy because someone came along and reset all my ratings to zero but dang.... this poem should not be number one!
On March 4th 2007 shannamoo Said :
shannamoo thats nice
On February 20th 2007 krissyblair Said :
krissyblair to me it seems that it could be many great seperate poems there are different emotions and fellings that you haven't made flow maybe if you took some of the lines out and made a new poem and added more to what was left it would be better it has a great idea but it ended just like bam it needed more or maybe less? depends on how the wording would be but it just stopped with no flow i'm sorry i don't like to criticize because i know that alot of my poems aren't that great either but i really think this could be good if put together right i hopr i wasn't mean or out of line i attempted to be comstructive with what i said if not this i'm sorry and disregard it thanks, Krista
On February 19th 2007 reinouye Said :
reinouye the whole thing sounds like an unorganized outpour of random ideas strung together in no logical form.
On February 18th 2007 reinouye Said :
reinouye i looked at the title and though that it was def. gonna be a great poem. after reading it, i have realized that i have been terribly mistaken.
On February 11th 2007 UTladyvol2013 Said :
UTladyvol2013 omg that is deep u should check out my poems.... they are pretty darn sad
On January 18th 2007 AshleyandCorey Said :
AshleyandCorey wow that is rele deep and everyone seems to feel like that sometime with someone they love ashley ann♥
On December 6th 2006 justineisinluv Said :
justineisinluv great!!! i luv ur style.
On September 8th 2006 KayBock05 Said :
KayBock05 that is soo cute!