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A weird poem written during class =)

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Terror

Views (42) Other Created on 10-5-07 Flag

this is just something i wrote during maths class it's a bad try at a Simily poem but anyway hope ya like it.

Terror knocked at my door that cold friday night//He seemed to get louder as i turned on the light//When i opened my front door he seemed to jump back//And sit there having an asthma attack

The louder the wind//the harded the breathing//All of a sudden it started the seezing

As i went back to bed on that cold windless night//My airways were feeling awfully tight//The knock on my window gave me a fright//As i tuned to look i saw a chook hanging on a butches hook

I started to weeze as i heard him sneeze// i fell to my kness begging him please!

He came to the open and sat me down there//And hit me real hard with a death stare//In his hand i saw a knife//I begged him not to kill my wife//hat was the day he took my life!

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On October 8th 2007 killerXmacky13 Said :
killerXmacky13 wierd but really good
On October 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 wow that was weird, but I liked it. Nice rhyming!
On October 7th 2007 augierd88 Said :
augierd88 thats really good... creepy but good