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A weird poem written during class =)Rate this Poem
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Dare to be different |
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1 cut 2 cut, old cut, new cut |
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Take the BLAME |
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Isn't it romantic? |
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Was it?? |
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Don't Die!!!! |
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I'll be FINE |
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What have i got to lose?? |
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SMILE |
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Terror |
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Terror
this is just something i wrote during maths class it's a bad try at a Simily poem but anyway hope ya like it.
Terror knocked at my door that cold friday night//He seemed to get louder as i turned on the light//When i opened my front door he seemed to jump back//And sit there having an asthma attack
The louder the wind//the harded the breathing//All of a sudden it started the seezing
As i went back to bed on that cold windless night//My airways were feeling awfully tight//The knock on my window gave me a fright//As i tuned to look i saw a chook hanging on a butches hook
I started to weeze as i heard him sneeze// i fell to my kness begging him please!
He came to the open and sat me down there//And hit me real hard with a death stare//In his hand i saw a knife//I begged him not to kill my wife//hat was the day he took my life!
| On October 8th 2007 killerXmacky13 Said : | |
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wierd but really good |
| On October 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow that was weird, but I liked it. Nice rhyming! |
| On October 7th 2007 augierd88 Said : | |
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thats really good... creepy but good |


