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after writing this, i wrote Going AwayRate this Poem
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Going Away |
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Why Me????? |
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To My Best Friend |
Invisible
When I'm lost
And I ask for direction
No one answers
No one will direct me
No matter how much I ask
I feel invisible to everyone
Does anybody see me?
I am here ya' know
And I'm trying to talk to you
Or at least have a decent conversation with someone
Will someone please hear me?
I need someone to talk to
So I'm not so invisible
When I'm helpless
And I ask for help
No one answers
No one will help me
No matter how much I ask
I feel invisible to everyoneDoes anybody see me?
I am here ya' know
And I'm trying to talk to you
Or at least have a decent conversation with someone
Will someone please hear me?
I need someone to talk to
So I'm not so invisible
Everyday I try to remove my mask
The one that hides my face
But no one ever hears me
So there's almost no point in taking it off
I've run out of things to say to people
I'm getting tired of trying
I should just leave
Its not like anyone will really notice anyway
i want to go somewhere
Where I can be alone
So that I know I'm not invisible
Please Login to post comments| On November 26th 2006 Soulcageprison Said: |
| Darlin' This is really good. It captures a lot of emotions and feelings. There were many times in my life I felt invisible and the part where you talk about taking off the mask really hit home with me. Please keep writing..Mike. |
| On November 26th 2006 NickCamp Said: |
| this ones strong sends me a message brings back memorys thats how it was before 5th grade with me |
