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song i wrote for my dad.Rate this Poem
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Created on 6-21-07
I want to tell you, I want to explain it all to you. Seems every time though. Something is in my way. So I will just lye awake crying for you. Praying you’ll change, and we both are going to get though it all. Another day another prayer another room full of silence. Another glare another stare. Just more time that passes by. And still havn’t told you, still haven’t spoke.
It hurts so bad ,if you could just get a taste of what his love is like maybe your heart would change. But for now I’ll just lye here awake praying and crying. Lord please help him see the light and lord change him tonight.
Amen.
Nothing happens, questions fill my head. More tears fall tonight. Hurt fills my heart tears fill eyes. I will just cry for you tonight.
Please Login to post comments| On July 24th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said : | |
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Great poem i love the flow of it! |
| On July 24th 2007 diet7up Said : | |
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WOW THAT IS SO SAD BUT SO GOOD IT MADE ME FEEL SO MUCH BUT HONEY MEN WILL NEVER CHANGE COMPLETELY SO IF YOUR SO SAD FOR ONE GUY YOU CAN MAKE IT BETTER |
| On July 18th 2007 tufrthnails Said : | |
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Sounds country!! I think I could pluck it out.
Great job |
| On June 21st 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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comments please!!!! ::::..... ren .....:::: |
