frodoismyname

i dunno it's just how i felt

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you told me...

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Created on 4-14-07

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you told me you were going to kill yourself i burst into tears couldn't exsplain my fear

my colorful world turned black & white everything i love flew out of site

i felt so scared as day turned into night i sat alone and cried each tear exsplained a different part of fear

i got a call that said she's alright my world came back into site

the color began to come back that's when i knew you were coming back.

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On May 13th 2007 tufrthnails Said :

	Definitely a deep poem. I like it.

On May 1st 2007 frodoismyname Said :

	it reminds me of my friend too... i wrote it when my friend told me that... April 10, 2007 8:32pm but shes okay now

On April 29th 2007 Yagelgirl Said :

	i like this poem very much..it reminds me of a friend

On April 23rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :

	I like happy endings. I like this poem too!!

On April 19th 2007 frodoismyname Said :

	tanks

On April 19th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :

	that's an excellent poem!!!!

On April 14th 2007 onaipwolf Said :

	You did a good job capturing the intensity of your emotions. :)

On April 14th 2007 SoulRevival18 Said :

	deep stuff... sucicide is a scary thing... i'm glad everythings alright!

On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said :

	this is fantastic, I know just how you feel, nearly lost one of my close friends of the family to suicide a few years, so yer, this explains exactly how i feel.

On April 14th 2007 rellcinko Said :

	i know this feeling been there...been on both ends of it actually

On April 14th 2007 frodoismyname Said :

	this is how felt... i dunno please comment