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Created on 4-13-07
You died for me so maybe that one day i could be free.
you gave me the choice to say i believe
when you died this world became only a temporary place. only one to face great loss and gain to learn the lessons of your love.
one day i will leave and i will come home to you and your grace.
im not home not yet...but i won't fret cuz im coming home just cuz he paid my debt.
Please Login to post comments| On July 22nd 2007 firecracker37 Said : | |
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Praise GOD. Good job |
| On May 13th 2007 tufrthnails Said : | |
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Keep it coming. |
| On May 1st 2007 Yagelgirl Said : | |
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very good poem |
| On May 1st 2007 suicidalslug Said : | |
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Im an athiest. But Im sure if I were Christian this would mean a lot. |
| On April 23rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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nice |
| On April 19th 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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thanks dudes. |
| On April 19th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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very good |
| On April 19th 2007 imbored9909 Said : | |
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nice |
| On April 15th 2007 MorSidAsh Said : | |
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VERY GOOD!!! |
| On April 14th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Nice |
| On April 14th 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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Jesus died on the cross... that's the person who i was refering too... he rose again 3 days lata so not to worry |
| On April 13th 2007 idolsforever Said : | |
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i like it. very intresting. i love the emotion. nice rhyme. |
| On April 13th 2007 lyssabean72792 Said : | |
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i like it. and i don't mean to be nosy or rude......but who died? |
| On April 13th 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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GOOD OR BAD COMMENT!!! |
