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Created on 4-9-07
i tell you it's over i can't take it anymore... i feel like giving up.
i pray to God that it won't happen please send me someone to help this passion. Right before i end my life i get a text that says keep up the fight.
I push onward only to find this bright shining light.
God you sent me an angel to keep me safe. thanks for not letting me go.
Please Login to post comments| On May 13th 2007 tufrthnails Said : | |
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I think maybe you are just working through the kinks of writing. This is not the best or the worst I have seen. Or have even written myself. Never stop writing. |
| On May 9th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is sad....really good, but sad...no one should have to feel this way. |
| On April 23rd 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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thanks allllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) |
| On April 23rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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I like this one too...not a horrible writer at all! Seems to me that you're very good. |
| On April 19th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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you're not horrible, it's good |
| On April 19th 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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YEAH that's happened to me before. |
| On April 19th 2007 imbored9909 Said : | |
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dude u aint horrible |
| On April 15th 2007 Wind226 Said : | |
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OMG...THIS IS SAD....HAS THIS HAPPENED TO YOU BEFORE? |
| On April 15th 2007 MorSidAsh Said : | |
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Very Good! But I have to say...I'm against suicide. :( |
| On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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I love it, dont be so hard on yourself hun! |
| On April 9th 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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i hate this it sux im a horrible writer |
| On April 9th 2007 frodoismyname Said : | |
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uh... sad but good
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