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ANYONE HAVE A MANUAL TO LIFE?
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Created on 12-23-06
its oh so confusing
wish there was a manual
tell me how to operate this thing called a life
so many different elements to it
like a puzzle
it can be hard to put together
like a map
it can be hard to find your way
like the dark
you cant see anything
like a murder mystery
you may think you have it figured out but theres always a plot twist
and like an elevator
it has its ups and downs
wish it wasnt so complicated
but i guess wishing doest really get me anywhere
it just leaves me sitting at this computer wondering
racking my brain
but not able to come up with any answers
there has to be some kind of answer key to this thing called life
and i guess you can say life is like one big pop quiz
you have no clue whats coming your way
so i guess what im saying is......
grab a seat and enjoy the show
cuz you cant really do anything but watch what happens next
Please Login to post comments| On December 23rd 2006 fritzi Said : | |
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well i did that cuz i wanted to bring you back to reality....do ya see what i mean? |
| On December 23rd 2006 Shreddatized Said : | |
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Its good. The only thing I found wrong was that it created a dreamy sort of mood, and once you mentioned sitting at the computer it pulled the mood away. I suggest replacing that line with something like just "sitting here wondering" |
