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Created: 07/24 2008
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Category: Passion

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Paradise

I smell the salt,

I hear the waves,

The wind whistles through the caves.

Under the sun,

In the heat.

I feel the sand on my bare feet.

The fish are vibrant,

The water's cool,

It forms a soft whirlpool.

The hammocks rock,

The soft wind blows.

The peace around you really shows.

The open bar,

The smell-good dinner,

I get a sunburn from the water's shimmer.

Colorful crabs,

And puffer fish.

Unfortunately, Jellyfish.

The sun's less hot,

It's time to go,

This was the most relaxing place, I'll ever know.

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On August 13th 2008 Stolensoul16 Said: 
Stolensoul16 I likes!
On July 27th 2008 halfemoon Said: 
halfemoon Kewl. It's got rhythm. =D
On July 24th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider nice:)