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Dissapointment..
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Created on 5-6-08
I can taste it,
the bittery assault,
it's rough and hard to swallow,
I'm sad that this didn't work out,
but you tried to change me and who I am,
my stomach tightens into knots,
but I cannot throw this feeling up
rejected.
left alone once again.
tis alright,
I'll make new friends,
have a new life,
dream big,
live up to potential,
but for now,
i'm content to wallow,
in the shallow depths of feeling
dissapointment
Please Login to post comments| On August 4th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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beautiful..... |
| On June 22nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love it. You're beautifully expressive, and based through feeling, you get to depths some can't fathom because their either scared to feel too much~ or they're still blind in this manner. Keep writing your feelings~ Hugs from this way :) |
