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Can I Just Kill Myself?

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can I just kill myself?
wash away the tears,
drown in my own emotions,
leave this messed up life,

there is no reason for me to stay,
i lay and think that,
i'm losing myself a little everyday,

no one will be able to tell me that I'm worthless,
or have to deal with the nuisance I am,
no one will be able to mock my drepression,
and hurt me ever again,

i feel so lonely,
my soul is nonexistent,
i keep my silence though,
because everytime I speak out i'm never heard anyways,

i struggle with myself,
i find no justice or peace,
no swirling black emotion just spirals down,
and widens the deep crevice within me

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On April 27th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 i know how you feel, i feel the same way
On April 27th 2008 N5607 Said :
N5607 Don't die, we'll miss yew! XP
On April 27th 2008 betyoucantgess Said :
betyoucantgess i felt the same once.
dont kill yourself
one day, everything is gonna be okay.
i promise.
On April 27th 2008 havenorreanna Said :
havenorreanna ok well i loved this poem and for the comment under mine how do you know that she not hurt??? how do you know that her parents want her??? how do you know that she does eat everyday??? well i'm ganna gess you dont!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its not your life!!! if you don't like what she wrights about DON'T READ IT!!!!! nno one forced you to read this you click it and you read it if you dont like this kined of stuff than read something with a title "sun shine" ok the title to this was "can i just kill myself"
On April 27th 2008 jseekanarchist Said :
jseekanarchist oh okay, so everyone here wants to kill themselves? what happened to you guys so bad that made you want to kill yourself, boyfriend/girlfriend dump you? it actually sickens me, because for the people out there that really do have fucked up lives, it just seems kind of mean to know that there are careless people that are crying about things that happens to pretty much EVERYBODY when they are the ones who have like maybe no family, no food, no place to live, nobody to care for them, its just sickening. and all you, im sure your parents love you and such, but your just going through that teenage rebellious stage where you think "oh, i have to clean my room, im gonna kill myself!" seriously, you guys need to stop being so dramatic. its really getting kind of old
On April 27th 2008 xCiNNAKiTTix Said :
xCiNNAKiTTix felt this way many times...i like this poem...
On April 26th 2008 raywiley69 Said :
raywiley69 this is the way i feel...i wanna die...great poem
On April 26th 2008 kendiott Said :
kendiott i really like it i feel this way all the time
On April 26th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 i love the poem it's how i feel everyday
On April 25th 2008 blueslips Said :
blueslips wow. been there done that. but i promise, i found a way out. it took awhile, and wasnt totally up to me. ask me aobut it some more if you want. :)
On April 25th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 good poem. thats how i feel right now. mi life is just slowly dissappearing. i can feel mi friends being ripped from me and mi emotions taking control as i dream about suicide. but kmp on ANY poems
On April 25th 2008 Gtown20 Said :
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I have deff..felt this feeling before and its not a good one. To feel like nobody can hear you when u scream at the top of ur lungs. To feel like nobody cares, and nobody is there for u when u need them. To feel like the wholeworld is coming down on you. Yea i kno how u feel. I like this one Its deep and i can deff relate to it.
On April 25th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Aww I've felt this feeling before but sometimes u need to find a way to get out of darkness if necessary. Aww im so sorry for u to feel that way but just go and get out of darkness. U will find a way to search for a light soon or later. I hate it when people try to kill themselves bec of depression. Please so don't do that. I love this poem a lot. It is well beautifully written.
On April 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ Gosh~ this one got 2 me. You captured how I've been feeling lately. *hugs* and hope you feel better. I know It's hard to snap out of. xo ashley
On April 25th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX This is very good. I've felt this way before.
On April 25th 2008 liz720614 Said :
liz720614 good poem. i feel like that all the time. keep up the good work:P