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Goodbye
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Created on 4-5-08
looking away,
avoiding life,
walking towards darkness,
done with the light,
knots tighten in my stomach,
tears sting in my eyes,
the pain hurts so much
confused and muddled,
goodbye to all,
I won't return,
this is too much,
no love, all pain,
I'm all alone,
unseeing the monsters that,
are all around me,
un-fighting to those who,
lie and decieve me,
words ar just words,
but the blood spills from me,
the knife is twisted in my back
goodbye my life,
goodbye to all
Please Login to post comments| On April 20th 2008 hotpinkangel10 Said : | |
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Good job. I like the structure. |
| On April 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Wow! aww sweetie, this is so good. Keep it up! Love ashley |
| On April 6th 2008 brokenwings122 Said : | |
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...I'm speechless. I like how, even without rhyme, your poem flows with an almost rythmic sense. |
| On April 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Beautiful written but sorrowful. I wish everything is going to be okay but it will be fine soon or later at least we face to something. Good job |
