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a man is just a man with no intentions

and a lion is just a cat with no built up tention

if every throne was meant for a lord to rest

then a king is nothing more than a prince or regret

 

if i am just a poet with words of no meaning

and anger just leads to a ruthless beating

if poetry was made for pain instead of beauty at its best

then i am just a shameful fiasco waiting for my death

 

if beauty has become the lust for women and bruises

then whats the point of the sun and the stars

if a warrior protects himself with a torn up tunic

then he is nothing more than a child with battle scars

 

if a man has become full of conceit

then your telling your love to kiss its self goodbye

and if orion would have admitted his defeat

 would his face still be shown in the sky

 

if a spirit is to be locked upon the sun

would you call him the son of day

if the fox knew he was finally done

then why would he try and run away

 

why would you give a man a title he hasnt earned

or teach a student something he has already learned

well i think ive told this story far too late

if you know who you are why escape your fate 

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On August 15th 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone i love it, it's awesome.thumbs up, cause i think this is one of your best right up there with 'questions' and 'answers' :-)
On July 23rd 2007 jmastap123 Said :
jmastap123 Its pretty good though
On July 23rd 2007 jmastap123 Said :
jmastap123 you are retarded hahah you incorrectly spelled tention which is tension
On July 22nd 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :
xxlostsoul14xx Well Done. :-)
On July 21st 2007 jewells716 Said :
jewells716 this is awesome. but i believe you are still trying to find yourself within your own writing. and that is ok we all do it. kudos to you.
On July 20th 2007 individulsong Said :
individulsong This, my friend, was the best poem i've read in a long time. Great job.
On July 20th 2007 hannah2sam Said :
hannah2sam i love it! you are really good, though i agree with jush, it would just make it easier to read, i kind of liked it though ;0 good job
On July 19th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 Another great poem! I love your work
On July 19th 2007 BlueShadow Said :
BlueShadow i agree with u
On July 19th 2007 Jush Said :
Jush i loved the poem. overall it was great but if your going to have sets of lines rhyme u should keep the rhyming consistent through the poem. =]
On July 19th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Oh my God. I really like this. You are probably one of the very few people who have sincere talent on this sight.
On July 19th 2007 Javellef Said :
Javellef Great poem!
On July 19th 2007 Rootietootchel Said :
Rootietootchel this is an amazing piece, althought some lines were a little etchy...still good..kudos
On July 19th 2007 angelofwar4 Said :
angelofwar4 WHOA! This is really great, I like it. This poem makes you think real deeply about alot of things. Good job, keep it up - I enjoy your works! :-)
On July 19th 2007 nevermine Said :
nevermine Beautifully worded! I love it!
On July 19th 2007 kantokah Said :
kantokah luv it great job.
On July 19th 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 dude i love ur flow,ur words,and just everything about ur stuff great job
On July 19th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth so amazing, well done.
On July 19th 2007 soothmysoul Said :
soothmysoul nice job
On July 19th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz Flasco, this is truly amazing, I really enjoyed this...great work...
On July 19th 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone this is awesome michael, i really like it.thumbs up.
On July 19th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said :
pinkpanther93 i really love this one..nice choice of words

and about those pain poems lol..u know i suck at happy ones lmao
On July 19th 2007 gmole Said :
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WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES
On July 19th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 i love this poem! ur a really good poet! =)
On July 19th 2007 Tony1985 Said :
Tony1985 OMG I like the first four lines the best! this is great work. Keep it up!