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incomplete

Views (125) Tragedy Created on 6-21-07 Flag

something has been taken away from me

i fear that i have fallen apart

i wonder if this was meant to be

15 puzzle pieces taken from my heart

 

i feel like a lifeless being

a child left alone in the street at night

my voice is caught and i cannot sing

but i want to believe everything is alright

 

where is my desire to live this life

but i have the want of happiness

my mind cant tell whats wrong and right

i think this is an emotional test

 

i put a smile on when she is near

but my tears cant stop its far too late

were best friends i told her no relationship is needed here

but why do i fel i have lost my fate

 

my feet walk forward, but my eyes turn around

i look back at my lost captain to my team

but my bestfriend is right here to make that awakening sound

thats if this life is just a tortured dream

 

i dont know what to say

i dont know what to feel

i want to run away but i cant

for my darkness is my shadow and my shadow is real

 

my mind is full of doubt 

and ill just lay here in the street

this is why i cry

and why im incomplete 

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On October 13th 2007 CocoaButter3 Said :
CocoaButter3 ur amazing! i luv it-
On August 22nd 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 This is...wow. I love this seriously. You are amazing.
On July 9th 2007 mazblondie Said :
mazblondie loved this poem..well written and touching.
On July 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane thee is definetly a mix of emotions and thoughts in this one.
On June 25th 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah very emotional. i could really feel the words. great job!
On June 21st 2007 mickygrl22 Said :
mickygrl22 ITS GOOD BUT IN MY OPINION UR COULD CUT IT UP AND MAKE MORE THEN ONE POEM WITH THIS, MICK5150