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just some of my feelingsRate this Poem
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appreciation to the burdened |
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breeze through the painting |
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depression is a war of the mind |
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another day |
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a place to be secure |
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incomplete |
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if i can |
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the black balmy ballad |
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art, artist, and the L word |
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the reflection of this poet |
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The Storm |
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To Liberty |
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Motives |
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Hidden |
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The Hidden Orchestra |
incomplete
something has been taken away from me
i fear that i have fallen apart
i wonder if this was meant to be
15 puzzle pieces taken from my heart
i feel like a lifeless being
a child left alone in the street at night
my voice is caught and i cannot sing
but i want to believe everything is alright
where is my desire to live this life
but i have the want of happiness
my mind cant tell whats wrong and right
i think this is an emotional test
i put a smile on when she is near
but my tears cant stop its far too late
were best friends i told her no relationship is needed here
but why do i fel i have lost my fate
my feet walk forward, but my eyes turn around
i look back at my lost captain to my team
but my bestfriend is right here to make that awakening sound
thats if this life is just a tortured dream
i dont know what to say
i dont know what to feel
i want to run away but i cant
for my darkness is my shadow and my shadow is real
my mind is full of doubt
and ill just lay here in the street
this is why i cry
and why im incomplete
| On October 13th 2007 CocoaButter3 Said : | |
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ur amazing! i luv it- |
| On August 22nd 2007 twilightx28 Said : | |
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This is...wow. I love this seriously. You are amazing. |
| On July 9th 2007 mazblondie Said : | |
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loved this poem..well written and touching. |
| On July 2nd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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thee is definetly a mix of emotions and thoughts in this one. |
| On June 25th 2007 blah2blah Said : | |
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very emotional. i could really feel the words. great job! |
| On June 21st 2007 mickygrl22 Said : | |
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ITS GOOD BUT IN MY OPINION UR COULD CUT IT UP AND MAKE MORE THEN ONE POEM WITH THIS, MICK5150 |


