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Quietly Going Insane

sit and rock gently back and forth

pick a spot to gaze at

yet not really see

hug yourself and stay quiet

quietly going insane

aching head-so many thoughts

trapped in my head

no way out

can't leave the nightmare

can't have dreams when sleeping

such blackness I cannot explain

WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?!

WHY AM I always lacking things

damn I just need to get this right

what am I missing in me that nobody else is

the abyss looms ever closer

so black

so...bottomless

bet I'd never come back

lost in the thoughts

the images that stick in my head

they stay and won't leave

so I sit there quietly

while my insides scream

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On June 26th 2009 roseling Said: 
roseling okay here is my reall comment this peom was so emotional your right i can relate to it. it has something about it that say "i dont need your help but i need your help" if you get it then good if not reread till you do but i reall like this peom it was like your emotions spilled out on a page great job keep it up
On June 26th 2009 roseling Said: 
roseling OMG I LOVE IT IT IS ME AND YOU HAHAHA I THINK I FEEL ALITTLE BETTER BUT NOT QUIET
On December 6th 2008 destinys420 Said: 
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oh my god i love this peom its really good!
On December 6th 2008 2b2 Said: 
2b2 wow that was the most deepest most soul taking pome!!
On December 6th 2008 firerocket67 Said: 
firerocket67 plz leave a detailed comment